Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me connect with others and lifts my mood. For example, my friends and I often go to KTV to sing when we celebrate special occasions or festivals.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法不准确且表达不连贯，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

Ví dụ: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. When I was young, my family had financial difficulties, so we had to prioritize essential expenses.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother because singing is a special way to show my love and emotions. I would choose songs that express my gratitude and affection for her.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误（seeing应为singing）和重复，建议注意用词准确，避免重复，并用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Absolutely, singing brings happiness because it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people connect emotionally. For instance, during festivals, many people enjoy singing together to celebrate.

× Yes, from my perspective, singing is a special way to connect each other together and it can boost our emotions and cheer.

✓ Yes, from my perspective, singing is a special way to connect with each other and it can boost our emotions and cheer.

动词connect后面需要加介词with来表示连接的对象，不能直接接each other。

× We cheer me up.

✓ It cheers me up.

主语和宾语不一致，we是复数主语，me是第一人称宾格，句子应使用it作为主语指代singing。

× Besides when when my friends and I are celebrating something important or celebrate some festival, so we prefer to go to the KTV to sing songs.

✓ Besides, when my friends and I are celebrating something important or some festival, we prefer to go to the KTV to sing songs.

句中Besides和so同时使用导致连接词重复，应去掉so，且when重复出现。

× No, I never received formal learning, singing training.

✓ No, I never received formal singing training.

formal和singing之间不需要逗号，且learning用法不当，应直接用singing training。

× I remember when I was young my family faced serious financial problems, so we must spend our money on daily essentials they don't have.

✓ I remember when I was young, my family faced serious financial problems, so we had to spend our money on daily essentials and they didn't have extra.

must用法不当，过去时应使用had to；句子结构不完整，需补充and连接后半句。

× I want to sing for my mother in my In my opinion, singing is a special way to connect us together and express our emotions.

✓ I want to sing for my mother. In my opinion, singing is a special way to connect us together and express our emotions.

句子中in my重复且结构混乱，应拆分为两个完整句子。

× So I want to sing some songs for my mom to express my love to her.

✓ So I want to sing some songs for my mom to express my love for her.

表达“表达对某人的爱”时，介词应为for而非to。

× I want to tell her how.

✓ I want to tell her how I feel.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Absolutely, seeing can bring a lot of happiness and and singing can also bring joyful atmosphere as seeing is a special way to connect each other and express our emotions.

✓ Absolutely, singing can bring a lot of happiness and can also bring a joyful atmosphere as singing is a special way to connect with each other and express our emotions.

seeing应为singing，且connect后需加介词with。

× When people celebrate some festivals, they prefer singing.

✓ When people celebrate some festivals, they prefer to sing.

prefer后接动词时应使用不定式to do形式，而非动名词。