Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、繰り返しや冗長な表現が見られます。また、「club game」という表現は意味が不明瞭で、より具体的な語彙を使うと良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、ストレス解消の理由を明確に述べることを意識してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. I often sing with my friends at a local karaoke club.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。過去形の使用や語順に注意し、情報を整理して話すことが大切です。また、具体的な練習内容や経験を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary school. My music teacher taught me how to sing high notes, and since my mother is a singer, we often practiced together.

Gợi ý: 文が途中で途切れているように感じられ、意味が不明瞭です。文法の改善とともに、理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが必要です。具体的な状況や感情を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my friends because in my country, it is common to perform songs at weddings. I would be happy to sing for them on such special occasions.

Gợi ý: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢で論理的な回答を心がけてください。具体例を加えるとさらに良くなります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to connect emotionally without using words. Music is a universal language that unites people worldwide.

× Yes, uh, I'm fond of singing because when I sing a song I can I can be relaxed and release my stress stressful and I always go to club game with my friend.

✓ Yes, uh, I'm fond of singing because when I sing a song I can be relaxed and release my stress and I always go to club games with my friends.

The word 'stressful' is an adjective and incorrectly used here; it should be 'stress' as a noun. Also, 'club game' should be plural 'club games' and 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. The phrase 'I can I can be relaxed' has a repeated 'I can' which should be corrected to a single 'I can be relaxed'.

× Yes, when I was in elementary school student my music teacher teach me how to sing high tone voice and and also my mother is a singer so we always practice.

✓ Yes, when I was an elementary school student, my music teacher taught me how to sing in a high tone voice and also my mother is a singer so we always practice.

The verb 'teach' should be in past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame. Also, 'elementary school student' needs an article 'an'. The phrase 'sing high tone voice' should be 'sing in a high tone voice' for correct preposition use.

× Yes, when I was in elementary school student my music teacher teach me how to sing high tone voice and and also my mother is a singer so we always practice.

✓ Yes, when I was an elementary school student, my music teacher taught me how to sing in a high tone voice and also my mother is a singer so we always practice.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'a high tone voice' to indicate the manner of singing.

× Yes, uh, I'm fond of singing because when I sing a song I can I can be relaxed and release my stress stressful and I always go to club game with my friend.

✓ Yes, uh, I'm fond of singing because when I sing a song I can be relaxed and release my stress and I always go to club games with my friends.

The nouns 'club game' and 'friend' should be plural 'club games' and 'friends' to correctly refer to multiple events and people.

× I want to sing for my friend because in my country it's common to sing for my friend when when wedding.

✓ I want to sing for my friend because in my country it's common to sing for my friend at weddings.

The preposition 'at' is used to indicate events like 'weddings'. Also, 'wedding' should be plural 'weddings' to generalize the statement.

× I want to sing for my friend because in my country it's common to sing for my friend when when wedding.

✓ I want to sing for my friend because in my country it's common to sing for my friend at weddings.

The noun 'wedding' should be plural 'weddings' to express the general practice.

× So I I will perform in front of my friends in in.

✓ So I will perform in front of my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and has repeated words 'in in'. Removing the repetition and incomplete phrase corrects the sentence.

× When we we're singing, we connected.

✓ When we were singing, we connected.

The contraction 'we're' means 'we are' which is incorrect here; it should be 'were' for past tense.

× When we we're singing, we connected. We can connect with each other, mind without language.

✓ When we were singing, we connected. We can connect with each other, mind to mind without language.

The phrase 'mind without language' is unclear and missing a preposition; 'mind to mind' is a common expression meaning mental connection.