Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I do enjoy a singing because I have a natural talent for it and a pleasant voice. Singing makes me feel relaxed and happy, especially when I prefer my favorite songs.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Umm, actually not uh, because I was paying more attention on my study, not for seeing. I think it's just a hobby that should not be study.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I don't have a specific person who I want to think for because I sing just for fun and I always sing when I am alone or I want my family to be more happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely this is the reason why I like singing. I don't know the exact reason but for in my opinion seeing can bring us express our emotions to others and.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如冠词使用不当(a singing应为 singing),表达不够自然。建议注意冠词和动词搭配,避免冗余,简洁表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because I have a natural talent and a pleasant voice. It helps me relax and feel happy, especially when I sing my favorite songs.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且用词错误(seeing应为 singing)。建议加强语法基础,注意动词形式和介词使用,表达要简洁明了。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I focused more on my studies. I think singing is just a hobby and does not require formal learning.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误(think for应为 sing for),句子结构不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性,句子简洁,逻辑清楚。
Ví dụ: I don't have a specific person to sing for because I sing just for fun. I usually sing when I am alone or to make my family happier.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误(seeing应为 singing),句子不完整,表达不连贯。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I like singing because it helps us express our emotions to others and can bring happiness to people.
× I do enjoy a singing because I have a natural talent for it and a pleasant voice.
✓ I do enjoy singing because I have a natural talent for it and a pleasant voice.
这里的“a singing”使用了错误的冠词。singing是不可数名词,不需要冠词“a”。应直接使用“singing”。
× especially when I prefer my favorite songs.
✓ especially when I sing my favorite songs.
这里“prefer”用法不当,句意应为“当我唱我喜欢的歌时”,应使用动词“sing”而非“prefer”。
× Have you ever learnt how to sing?
✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?
“learnt”是“learn”的过去分词,英式英语中可用,但美式英语中更常用“learned”。根据语境选择合适形式。
× because I was paying more attention on my study, not for seeing.
✓ because I was paying more attention to my study, not to singing.
动词“pay attention”后应接介词“to”,且“seeing”应为“singing”,且介词应为“to”。
× I think it's just a hobby that should not be study.
✓ I think it's just a hobby that should not be studied.
“study”应为被动形式“studied”,因为这里是被动语态,表示“应该不被学习”。
× I don't have a specific person who I want to think for because I sing just for fun and I always sing when I am alone or I want my family to be more happy.
✓ I don't have a specific person who I want to sing for because I sing just for fun and I always sing when I am alone or when I want my family to be happier.
“think for”应为“sing for”,且“more happy”应改为比较级“happier”,并且缺少连词“when”。
× Yes, absolutely this is the reason why I like singing. I don't know the exact reason but for in my opinion seeing can bring us express our emotions to others and.
✓ Yes, absolutely, this is the reason why I like singing. I don't know the exact reason but in my opinion singing can help us express our emotions to others.
“for in my opinion”应为“in my opinion”,且“seeing”应为“singing”,句子末尾不完整,需补充完整表达。