Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达的意思较为清晰，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“soften my throat”不符合英语习惯，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Whenever I feel overwhelmed, singing lifts my mood and makes me feel better.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“refer to you to music”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的语法和词汇。

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn singing basics by listening to music, but since it's not related to my future career, I haven't focused much on it.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但句子结构较为重复和冗长。建议使用更简洁的句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my parents because they have always supported me throughout my studies and my journey to become a solicitor.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子之间更连贯，同时词汇可以更丰富一些。建议适当增加连接词和多样化词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their emotions and appreciate music's beauty. For instance, singing can relieve stress and promote relaxation. Moreover, famous artists like Taylor Swift hold concerts worldwide, spreading joy to countless fans.

× When pressure contains into my mind I've I'm not feeling well and I may be getting sick.

✓ When pressure enters my mind, I don't feel well and I may be getting sick.

句中使用了错误的动词形式“contains into”，应使用“enters”表示“进入”。此外，句子时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时表达习惯性状态。

× No, I haven't learned in a formal way to practice singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned to practice singing in a formal way.

句中“learned”使用正确，但表达顺序不自然，调整语序使句子更符合英语习惯。

× I only refer to you to music, uh, to learn the basics of singing, uh, because I, it's just not my focus area of my future career, so no.

✓ I only refer to music to learn the basics of singing because it's just not the focus area of my future career, so no.

“refer to you to music”中“refer to you”用法错误，应直接说“refer to music”。此外，句子中多余的“uh”应去除，表达更清晰。

× I think I may sing to my parents because they have been supporting my academics and all the way along to become a solicitor they have been staying alongside me to give me support.

✓ I think I may sing for my parents because they have been supporting my academics and have been staying alongside me all the way to become a solicitor to give me support.

“sing to my parents”应改为“sing for my parents”，表示为他们唱歌。句中“all the way along to become a solicitor”表达不自然，调整为“all the way to become a solicitor”。

× So singing to my parents.

✓ So singing for my parents.

同上，“singing to my parents”应改为“singing for my parents”。