Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice. My friends often say that I sing poorly, so I lack confidence.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免重复，并且更清楚地说明学习方法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned to sing by myself. I improved by imitating singers' voices, which helped me develop my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了意图，但语法和用词不准确，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用正确的代词和时态，并使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for people who enjoy listening to my voice. If someone appreciates my singing, I would be happy to perform for them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people, especially cheerful and sweet songs that lift their mood.

× I don't like singing because I think I'm not the people to sing.

✓ I don't like singing because I think I'm not the person to sing.

这里的“people”是复数形式，但句子中指的是单数的“我”，应该用单数形式“person”。

× My friends around me always told told me, always tells me that my voice is poor so I don't have the confidence to sing.

✓ My friends around me always tell me that my voice is poor, so I don't have the confidence to sing.

主语是复数“friends”，谓语动词应使用原形“tell”，而不是第三人称单数形式“tells”。另外，“told told”重复，应去掉一个。

× Yeah, I have learned how to sing but it's it's by my it's self learning.

✓ Yeah, I have learned how to sing but it's by self-learning.

“it's it's by my it's self learning”结构混乱，且“it's self learning”应为“self-learning”，表示自学。这里没有明显的过去时错误，但句子结构需要调整。

× I learned how to see by imitate the voice of the singer.

✓ I learned how to sing by imitating the voice of the singer.

“learned how to see”应为“learned how to sing”，动词错误；“by imitate”应为“by imitating”，介词后应接动名词形式。

× I want to sing for someone that want to listen my voice, you know, I think if someone appreciates you and I will willing to sing for him.

✓ I want to sing for someone who wants to listen to my voice. You know, I think if someone appreciates you, I will be willing to sing for him.

“someone that want”中“someone”是单数，谓语动词应为“wants”；“listen my voice”应为“listen to my voice”；“I will willing”应为“I will be willing”，缺少系动词。

× I want to sing for someone that want to listen my voice, you know, I think if someone appreciates you and I will willing to sing for him.

✓ I want to sing for someone who wants to listen to my voice. You know, I think if someone appreciates you, I will be willing to sing for him.

“listen my voice”缺少介词“to”，正确用法是“listen to”。

× I think if someone appreciates you and I will willing to sing for him.

✓ I think if someone appreciates you, I will be willing to sing for him.

“will willing”中“willing”是形容词，前面需要加系动词“be”，构成“will be willing”。

× Yeah, singing can bring happiness to people, especially some happy and sweet sing songs which can bring happy to people.

✓ Yeah, singing can bring happiness to people, especially some happy and sweet songs which can bring happiness to people.

“sing songs”重复，“sing”应去掉；“bring happy”应为“bring happiness”，名词形式更合适。