Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Tente responder diretamente à pergunta com uma frase clara e evite repetições. Use vocabulário mais preciso e organize suas ideias para que a resposta fique mais natural e coerente.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because music helps me express my emotions. It can make me feel happy or comfort me when I'm sad.

Gợi ý: Procure estruturar sua resposta com uma frase direta e explique suas ideias com clareza, evitando frases confusas e repetitivas.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken singing lessons. I prefer to sing in a way that feels natural and enjoyable to me.

Gợi ý: Responda diretamente e use conectores para explicar suas ideias de forma clara e organizada. Evite frases longas e confusas.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for many people who enjoy my music, but I don't feel ready to perform in front of a large audience yet.

Gợi ý: Sua resposta está boa, mas pode ser ainda mais natural se usar conectores para ligar as ideias e evitar pequenas falhas gramaticais.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness. It helps people express their emotions and relieve stress. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel happier and more relaxed because it distracts me from my worries.

× I like a lot singer because I love music.

✓ I like a lot of singers because I love music.

The phrase 'a lot singer' is incorrect because 'a lot' should be followed by a plural noun when referring to many items. The correct form is 'a lot of singers' to indicate multiple singers.

× When we are sad, we can feel this feeling, and when we're happy we can feel this feeling too, expressing between the music.

✓ When we are sad, we can feel this feeling, and when we're happy, we can feel it too, expressed through the music.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Expressing between the music' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning by using 'expressed through the music' to indicate how feelings are conveyed.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Using 'learned' is more standard in this context.

× No, actually I don't.

✓ No, actually I haven't.

The question uses present perfect tense ('Have you ever learnt'), so the negative answer should also be in present perfect ('I haven't') rather than simple present ('I don't').

× I just think the way I feel that is the correct way.

✓ I just think the way I feel is the correct way.

The phrase 'that is' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. Removing 'that is' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× And I don't think the right way.

✓ And I don't think there is a right way.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'there is' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I want to be able to sing for a lot of people that like my music, but I don't believe that I'm prepared for this.

✓ I want to be able to sing for a lot of people who like my music, but I don't believe that I'm prepared for this.

The relative pronoun 'that' is less appropriate when referring to people; 'who' should be used instead.

× Singing allows people to express their emotions freely and can be great way to release negative feelings or stress.

✓ Singing allows people to express their emotions freely and can be a great way to release negative feelings or stress.

The phrase 'can be great way' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'great way'.