Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
I like singing because I think singing can relax myself and I always singing in the morning. I think it's really energetic job.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't learned how to sing. I always singing with the song and listen others how to singing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I like to sing for my friend because we can sing together and create a very relaxed atmosphere. It's really exciting.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think singing can bring many advantages to people. It allows them to share their fun, relax their them and forget the stress. It's a really exciting work.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如"I always singing"应为"I always sing",并且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. I usually sing in the morning, which makes me feel energetic throughout the day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如"I always singing"应为"I always sing","listen others how to singing"表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达,并注意语法和句子结构。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons. I usually sing along with songs and try to imitate how others sing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但可以增加细节使内容更丰富。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并提供更多具体原因。
Ví dụ: I like to sing for my friends because singing together creates a relaxed and joyful atmosphere, which makes our gatherings more enjoyable.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和用词错误,如"relax their them"不正确,"exciting work"用词不当。建议使用更准确的表达,并注意句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people share joy, relax, and forget their stress. It is a very enjoyable activity.
× I like singing because I think singing can relax myself and I always singing in the morning.
✓ I like singing because I think singing can relax me and I always sing in the morning.
动词后面加 -ing 形式用法错误。这里“always singing”应改为“always sing”,因为“always”后面用动词原形表示习惯动作;另外“relax myself”应改为“relax me”,因为“relax”是及物动词,宾语用宾格代词。
× I think it's really energetic job.
✓ I think it's a really energetic activity.
形容词用法错误。“job”通常指工作,这里用“activity”更合适;且缺少冠词“a”。
× No, I haven't learned how to sing. I always singing with the song and listen others how to singing.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I always sing along with the song and listen to others sing.
动词形式错误。“always singing”应为“always sing”;“listen others”应为“listen to others”;“how to singing”应为“how to sing”或直接用“sing”。
× I always singing with the song and listen others how to singing.
✓ I always sing along with the song and listen to others sing.
介词使用错误。“singing with the song”应为“sing along with the song”;“listen others”应为“listen to others”。
× I like to sing for my friend because we can sing together and create a very relaxed atmosphere.
✓ I like to sing for my friends because we can sing together and create a very relaxed atmosphere.
单复数错误。“friend”应为复数“friends”,因为通常指多个人。
× It's really exciting.
✓ It's really exciting.
此句无语法错误,无需修改。
× Yes, I think singing can bring many advantages to people. It allows them to share their fun, relax their them and forget the stress.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring many advantages to people. It allows them to share their fun, relax themselves and forget the stress.
代词使用错误。“relax their them”应为“relax themselves”,反身代词用于动作反射到自身。
× It's a really exciting work.
✓ It's really exciting work.
冠词使用错误。“work”作为不可数名词时前面不加冠词“a”。