Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ кейбір сөйлемдер тым ұзақ және қайталанатын. Келесіде жауаптарыңызды қысқа әрі нақты етіп, артық сөздерді азайтыңыз. Мысалы, "I like singing, but I don't have a good voice, so I prefer not to sing in front of others."

Ví dụ: I enjoy singing because it relaxes me, but since my voice isn't very strong, I usually avoid singing in front of people.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз жақсы құрылымдалған және нақты, бірақ кейбір сөздер қайталанып тұр (мысалы, "really really"). Қайталаудан аулақ болыңыз және сөйлемдерді біршама қысқартыңыз.

Ví dụ: I have never learned to sing. As a child, I wanted to attend singing classes, but my parents preferred me to focus on school instead.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда артық қайталанулар бар және сөйлемдер ұзақ. Жауапты қысқа әрі нақты етіп, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз. Мысалы, "I don't have a strong voice, so I prefer singing just for myself rather than for others."

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong voice, so I usually sing only for myself rather than for others.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз түсінікті, бірақ "umm" сияқты толтырғыш сөздерді азайтыңыз және сөйлемдерді нақты әрі қысқа етіп құрыңыз. Мысалы, "Yes, singing can bring happiness because people enjoy singing along at live concerts."

Ví dụ: Yes, singing brings happiness because at live concerts, people sing along and feel joyful.

× Because of that, I try not to think in front of people.

✓ Because of that, I try not to sing in front of people.

The verb 'think' is incorrectly used with the preposition 'in front of'. The intended meaning is about performing singing, so the verb should be 'sing' to match the context. The preposition 'in front of' is correct when referring to performing before an audience.

× I've never learned to sing.

✓ I've never learnt to sing.

The verb 'learn' in British English past participle form is 'learnt', which matches the rest of the transcript's style. Using 'learnt' is more consistent and appropriate here.

× my parents thought that it would be better to focus on my school lessons instead of singing.

✓ my parents thought that it would be better to focus on my school lessons rather than singing.

The phrase 'instead of' is acceptable but 'rather than' is more appropriate when comparing two activities to focus on. It improves clarity and formality.

× I've, as I said before, I don't have a really strong voice.

✓ As I said before, I don't have a really strong voice.

The phrase 'I've, as I said before, I' is redundant and incorrect. The pronoun 'I've' (I have) is unnecessary here and causes confusion. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

× they really feel happy and they are in existence.

✓ they really feel happy and they exist.

The phrase 'they are in existence' is awkward and unnatural. Using the verb 'exist' directly is clearer and more idiomatic in English.