Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy singing because I often sing out of tune. However, I still go to karaoke with my friends for fun.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致，同时表达更具体的原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child because music lessons are compulsory in Chinese primary schools. However, I was not very interested, so I didn't practice much.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议明确表达原因，避免模糊的词汇，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family and friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. Also, sharing songs online can connect us with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误。建议简洁表达观点，使用具体例子，并注意句子结构的正确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can make people happy. For example, when someone feels sad, singing a song can help them relax and reduce stress.

× Personally I'm not a fan of singing because I always sing a song out of tune, but I always went to the karaoke with my friends just for entertainment.

✓ Personally I'm not a fan of singing because I always sing a song out of tune, but I always go to karaoke with my friends just for entertainment.

The sentence mixes present tense ('I always sing') with past tense ('I always went'). Since the action of going to karaoke is habitual, the present tense 'go' should be used instead of the past tense 'went'. Also, 'the karaoke' is incorrect; 'karaoke' is uncountable here and does not need 'the'.

× I learned how to sing when I was a kid because every student in China are required to receive the musical lesson in primary school.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a kid because every student in China is required to receive the musical lesson in primary school.

The subject 'every student' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.

× ...so that is why I always sing songs out too.

✓ ...so that is why I always sing songs out of tune too.

The phrase 'sing songs out' is incomplete and unclear. The correct expression is 'sing songs out of tune' to indicate singing off-key.

× Personally, I want to sing for my family and friends because it can improve our relationship and seeing it can also help us online.

✓ Personally, I want to sing for my family and friends because it can improve our relationship and singing can also help us online.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'singing'. 'Seeing' is a wrong word choice and changes the meaning.

× ...when someone is in a bad mood, seeing the sing a song can help him unwind and release his pressure.

✓ ...when someone is in a bad mood, singing a song can help him unwind and release his pressure.

'Seeing the sing a song' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'singing a song'. Also, 'him' is acceptable if referring to a generic person, but 'their' could be more inclusive.