Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and recharge my energy. I also enjoy watching singing competitions, which inspire me a lot.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接说明学习唱歌的方式和感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned to sing by watching online videos and taking lessons from a teacher. Learning these skills made me very happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少填充词，清晰表达想为父母唱歌的原因和愿望。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because they have supported me financially to learn singing. If I get the chance, I will perform for them to show my progress.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子直接表达观点，并举例说明唱歌带来的快乐。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can make people happy. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed after singing their favorite songs.

× Well, I'm a signing lover, you know, I always enjoy a lot of singing competitions when I I found that when I sing, singing it can give me a lot of relaxing and can recharge my batteries.

✓ Well, I'm a singing lover, you know, I always enjoy a lot of singing competitions. I found that when I sing, singing can give me a lot of relaxation and can recharge my batteries.

这里'signing'是拼写错误，应该是'singing'。'a lot of singing competitions'是复数形式，正确。'a lot of relaxing'应改为'a lot of relaxation'，因为'relaxing'是形容词，名词形式是'relaxation'。

× Well, I'm a signing lover, you know, I always enjoy a lot of singing competitions when I I found that when I sing, singing it can give me a lot of relaxing and can recharge my batteries.

✓ Well, I'm a singing lover, you know, I always enjoy a lot of singing competitions. I found that when I sing, singing can give me a lot of relaxation and can recharge my batteries.

句中'I found'是过去时，前后时态应一致，且句子结构应分开，避免时态混乱。

× Yes, I learn how to think through some media and ask teacher for help in with my teacher I learn about something skills and it's made me feel over the moon.

✓ Yes, I learn how to sing through some media and ask my teacher for help. With my teacher, I learn some skills and it makes me feel over the moon.

'learn'用现在时表示习惯动作，正确。'think'应为'sing'，语义错误。'ask teacher'缺少冠词，改为'ask my teacher'。'it's made'时态不一致，改为'it makes'。

× Yes, I learn how to think through some media and ask teacher for help in with my teacher I learn about something skills and it's made me feel over the moon.

✓ Yes, I learn how to sing through some media and ask my teacher for help. With my teacher, I learn some skills and it makes me feel over the moon.

'ask teacher for help in with my teacher'中介词使用混乱，应简化为'ask my teacher for help'，'with my teacher'单独成句。

× Yes, I learn how to think through some media and ask teacher for help in with my teacher I learn about something skills and it's made me feel over the moon.

✓ Yes, I learn how to sing through some media and ask my teacher for help. With my teacher, I learn some skills and it makes me feel over the moon.

'something skills'应为'some skills'，'something'用法错误，'some'用于复数名词。

× Well, umm, I want to think for my parents, umm, you know, umm, they uh, support me. A lot of funding to learn how to sing.

✓ Well, umm, I want to sing for my parents, umm, you know, umm, they uh, support me a lot with funding to learn how to sing.

'think for my parents'应为'sing for my parents'，动词错误。'support me. A lot of funding'句子断裂，应合并为'support me a lot with funding'。

× Well, if I have opportunity, I will uh, sing for them and let them know how I have improved.

✓ Well, if I have the opportunity, I will sing for them and let them know how I have improved.

'if I have opportunity'缺少冠词'the'，应为'if I have the opportunity'。未来时态使用正确。

× Well, if I have opportunity, I will uh, sing for them and let them know how I have improved.

✓ Well, if I have the opportunity, I will sing for them and let them know how I have improved.

冠词'the'缺失，'opportunity'前应加定冠词。

× While seeing can bring happiness to people, indeed you can easy to find that some people are who people who in the certainness when they are singing, they can feel happy after they sing.

✓ While singing can bring happiness to people, indeed you can easily find that some people, when they are singing, feel happy afterwards.

'seeing'应为'singing'，动词错误。'easy to find'应为'easily find'，副词形式。'some people are who people who in the certainness'语序混乱，应简化。

× While seeing can bring happiness to people, indeed you can easy to find that some people are who people who in the certainness when they are singing, they can feel happy after they sing.

✓ While singing can bring happiness to people, indeed you can easily find that some people, when they are singing, feel happy afterwards.

'adj + to do'结构错误，'easy'应改为副词'easily'。句子结构混乱，需调整。