Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and enjoy time with my friends during weekends.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清，建议用简单句子直接说明是否学过唱歌，并解释原因。

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually sing naturally with my friends for fun.

Gợi ý: 表达有些混乱，建议简洁明了地说明为谁唱歌，并解释原因，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my parents because it is a way to show my love and make them happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议用简单句子清楚表达观点并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness. When I feel happy, I like to sing, and when I am sad, singing helps me feel better.

× Yes I do, I really like seeing this my friends during weekends because it's a good way to from the relationship with my friends and we are happy to same.

✓ Yes, I do. I really like seeing my friends during weekends because it's a good way to build relationships with my friends and we are happy together.

句子中“this my friends”应为“my friends”，去掉多余的“this”。“from the relationship”应为“build relationships”，表达建立关系的意思。最后“we are happy to same”应为“we are happy together”，表达我们一起开心。

× Not really I just learned how to sing in my primary skills are cause and I don't I didn't train why is my thing.

✓ Not really. I just learned how to sing in primary school, and I didn't train because singing is not my thing.

句子中“in my primary skills are cause”应为“in primary school”，表达在小学学过。后半句“and I don't I didn't train why is my thing”语法混乱，应改为“and I didn't train because singing is not my thing”，表达我没有训练因为唱歌不是我的强项。

× I think it's just a natural way to same with my friends.

✓ I think it's just a natural way to sing with my friends.

“to same”应为“to sing”，动词错误。

× Personally, I just like to sing for my parents, but also it's a good way to show them my love.

✓ Personally, I just like to sing for my parents, and it's also a good way to show them my love.

连接词“but also”用法不当，应改为“and it's also”，使句子更通顺。

× And my parents are the vast audience for May because they love Native.

✓ And my parents are the biggest audience for me because they love singing.

“vast audience”表达不准确，应为“biggest audience”表示最大观众。“for May”应为“for me”，“Native”应为“singing”，词汇错误。

× Yes, of course, when you are happy you you'd like to sing natural light to my profile and when you feel down or sad, it's a good way to make you excited.

✓ Yes, of course. When you are happy, you would like to sing naturally, and when you feel down or sad, it's a good way to cheer you up.

“you you'd like to sing natural light to my profile”语法和词汇错误，应为“you would like to sing naturally”。“make you excited”应为“cheer you up”，表达使你振作起来。