Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'The reason why uh, it always just give me a positive energy,' say 'I like singing because it always gives me positive energy and allows me to express my emotions.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it always gives me positive energy. Moreover, it helps me express my feelings and emotions effectively, which I find very satisfying.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and concise sentences without repetition. Avoid unclear words like 'Hopian' and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain your point logically. For example, say 'I have never taken singing professionally because I don't consider myself talented enough to pursue it further.'

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned singing professionally because I don't think I have the talent to take it to a higher level. Therefore, I just enjoy singing as a hobby.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer by directly addressing who you want to sing for, not just your favorite singer. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Hair style of thinking' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I would like to sing for people like Adele, who inspire me with their talent and emotional expression.'

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for people who appreciate emotional and powerful music, like Adele's fans. She is iconic and very talented, and I admire how she expresses her feelings through her songs.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, 'I believe singing is an important part of the entertainment industry because it brings joy and hope to people. Additionally, it allows people to express their emotions in different ways.'

Ví dụ: I think singing plays a major role in bringing happiness and entertainment. It brings joy and enthusiasm, and it helps people express their emotions. Therefore, singing is important for enhancing our mood and well-being.

× Actually singing is one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ Actually, singing is one of my favorite hobbies.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' to separate the introductory word from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× The reason why uh, it always just give me a positive energy and I feel like I can express my feelings and my emotions through singing, which is a great thing.

✓ The reason why, uh, it always just gives me positive energy and I feel like I can express my feelings and my emotions through singing, which is a great thing.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'a positive energy' is better as 'positive energy' without 'a' because 'energy' is uncountable here.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learned' is the preferred past participle in American English, while 'learnt' is British English. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Here, 'learned' is suggested for clarity.

× I never, I never take singing in a professional way.

✓ I have never taken singing in a professional way.

The present perfect tense 'have never taken' is appropriate to express an experience up to now. Also, 'take singing' is awkward; 'taken singing' fits better in this context.

× It was always a Hopian.

✓ It was always a hobby.

The word 'Hopian' is incorrect; the intended word is 'hobby'. This correction fixes the spelling error to make the sentence meaningful.

× I think it will remain it.

✓ I think it will remain the same.

The phrase 'remain it' is incorrect; 'remain the same' is the correct expression to indicate continuation without change.

× It remains like this.

✓ It remains like this.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change.

× Uh, I'm not a professional singer Also, I don't have this, I, I'm not talented, I don't have this style and so I can take it to an extra level.

✓ Uh, I'm not a professional singer. Also, I don't have this talent or style, so I can't take it to an extra level.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Adding a period after 'singer' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity. 'I don't have this' is vague; specifying 'talent or style' clarifies meaning. 'Can' should be 'can't' to match the intended negative meaning.

× Actually I have a lot of, uh, favorite singers but the main one for me or the best one is Adele I really enjoy.

✓ Actually, I have a lot of, uh, favorite singers, but the main one for me, or the best one, is Adele. I really enjoy her.

The sentence lacks commas and a period, causing confusion. Adding punctuation separates ideas clearly. 'I really enjoy' is incomplete; adding 'her' completes the thought.

× Hair style of thinking and the hair types of songs.

✓ Her style of singing and the types of songs.

'Hair' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'her'. 'Style of thinking' should be 'style of singing' to make sense in context. Correcting these clarifies the meaning.

× However, I believe she is iconic.

✓ However, I believe she is iconic.

This sentence is correct and needs no change.

× She has she's super talented and she can express her.

✓ She is super talented and she can express herself.

'She has she's' is redundant and incorrect; 'She is' is correct. 'Express her' should be 'express herself' to use the reflexive pronoun properly.

× I think singing is one of the main industries for hapiness an entertainment.

✓ I think singing is one of the main sources of happiness and entertainment.

'Industries' is incorrect here; 'sources' fits better. 'Hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'. 'An' should be 'and' to connect two nouns.

× It always brings joy and enthusiasm and give people hope and expressed their life and their emotions in different ways.

✓ It always brings joy and enthusiasm, gives people hope, and expresses their life and their emotions in different ways.

The verbs after 'and' must agree in form and tense. 'Give' should be 'gives' and 'expressed' should be 'expresses' to maintain parallel structure and present tense.

× So I think we can learn from the music and from the singing, and it's really important to enhance.

✓ So I think we can learn from music and singing, and it's really important to enhance them.

'The music' and 'the singing' are better without 'the' here. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'them' clarifies what is important to enhance.