Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I really enjoy seeing. I think it's a good way to brighten my mood.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Yeah, when I was a child, I I have known how to sync. My teacher was so supportive and patient and she taught me a lot of sums that makes me relax.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Oh, I'd like to sing for my mom. I think saying is a good way to express 1's gratitude. So I really want to sing for my mom to express my best wishes and gratitude.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely seeing a reality bring happiness to people. When you seeing you just feel a sense of happiness and it's a good way to reduce your stress after now work. For me I really found of seeing after long time.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有发音错误("seeing" 应为 "singing"),影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意发音准确,同时回答可以更自然流畅,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps lift my spirits and makes me feel happier.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当("sync" 应为 "sing","sums" 可能是误用),句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和语法,表达更具体的学习经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child. My teacher was very patient and supportive, and she taught me techniques that helped me relax while singing.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有发音错误("saying" 应为 "singing"),且表达略显重复。建议注意发音准确,简洁表达感情。
Ví dụ: I would love to sing for my mom because singing is a wonderful way to show my gratitude and best wishes to her.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中多次发音错误("seeing" 应为 "singing"),句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议练习正确发音,使用连贯的句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness to people. When you sing, you feel joyful and it helps reduce stress after a long day at work.
× I really enjoy seeing.
✓ I really enjoy singing.
动词enjoy后应接动名词形式,seeing是动词see的现在分词,语义不符,应改为singing。
× I I have known how to sync.
✓ I have known how to sing.
句中重复了I,应删除多余的I;动词know的过去分词形式是known,时态使用现在完成时,符合语境。
× I have known how to sync.
✓ I have known how to sing.
单词sync拼写错误,应为sing。
× My teacher was so supportive and patient and she taught me a lot of sums that makes me relax.
✓ My teacher was so supportive and patient and she taught me a lot of songs that make me relax.
单词sums拼写错误,应为songs;主语a lot of songs为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式make。
× I think saying is a good way to express 1's gratitude.
✓ I think singing is a good way to express one's gratitude.
动词think后接动名词形式singing;'1's'应为'one's',表示“某人的”。
× Yeah, definitely seeing a reality bring happiness to people.
✓ Yeah, definitely singing really brings happiness to people.
seeing拼写错误,应为singing;主语singing为单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式brings。
× When you seeing you just feel a sense of happiness and it's a good way to reduce your stress after now work.
✓ When you sing, you just feel a sense of happiness and it's a good way to reduce your stress after work.
动词see的现在分词seeing用法错误,应改为动词原形sing;'now work'应为'work'。
× For me I really found of seeing after long time.
✓ For me, I really am fond of singing after a long time.
found拼写错误,应为fond;seeing应为singing;缺少冠词a;句子缺少系动词am。