Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by making it more concise and using clearer linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid redundancy such as "sing my feelings out" and "sing some cheerful songs like energetic ones" which is a bit unclear. Try to use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Since childhood, I have attended music school where I learned to sing various songs. Moreover, singing cheerful and energetic songs always lifts my mood and makes the experience enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Some sentences are incomplete or confusing, such as "I loved singing singles" and "I was late." Try to organize your answer logically, use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid vague or unclear phrases. Also, correct grammar mistakes and improve vocabulary usage for better clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing by attending a music school outside of my regular classes. The director was a famous singer in Kazakhstan, whose songs I really admired, so I joined because of him. Although I started learning a bit late, I enjoyed practicing solo songs and improving my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is fragmented and contains many hesitations and incomplete sentences. To improve, try to give a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler words like "Aye" and "Uhm" and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Ví dụ: I enjoy singing for an audience because performing on stage motivates me to improve. Although I stopped performing after fifth grade due to family issues, I still love the experience of singing in front of a crowd and hope to do it again in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid short, choppy sentences like "For example." and "Explore them actually." Instead, use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, check subject-verb agreement, e.g., "singing definitely brings happiness."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their emotions and relieve stress. For instance, I often sing when I want to communicate my feelings, using music as a way to explore and understand my emotions better.

× Since I was a kid, I used to go to music school and sing my feelings out.

✓ Since I was a kid, I used to go to music school and sing my feelings out.

No correction needed here as 'used to go' correctly indicates a past habitual action.

× The director there was a like famous singer in the Kazakhstan and I loved his songs.

✓ The director there was a famous singer in Kazakhstan and I loved his songs.

The phrase 'a like famous singer' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. Also, 'the Kazakhstan' is incorrect because country names usually do not take 'the' unless plural or descriptive; 'Kazakhstan' is correct.

× And definitely I signed up because of him.

✓ And definitely I signed up because of him.

No correction needed; past tense 'signed up' is appropriate here.

× But then again, I loved singing singles.

✓ But then again, I loved singing solo songs.

The word 'singles' is ambiguous and likely incorrect in this context; 'solo songs' or 'singing solo' better conveys the intended meaning.

× I was late.

✓ I was late.

No correction needed; sentence is correct but contextually unclear.

× Aye. Used to perform on stage.

✓ Yes, I used to perform on stage.

The sentence fragment 'Used to perform on stage' lacks a subject; adding 'I' completes the sentence.

× But after 5th grade I stopped due to my family issues.

✓ But after 5th grade, I stopped due to my family issues.

No tense correction needed; adding a comma after '5th grade' improves readability.

× It's motivated me to perform better.

✓ It has motivated me to perform better.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' or 'it has'; here, 'has' is needed to form the present perfect tense.

× Oh singing definitely bring happiness to people and allows them to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

✓ Oh, singing definitely brings happiness to people, allows them to express their emotions, and can be a great way to relieve stress.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'singing' as a singular noun requires 'brings' not 'bring'. Also, parallel structure requires consistent verb forms.

× For example. I sing when I want to say something.

✓ For example, I sing when I want to say something.

'For example' should be followed by a comma, not a period, to connect the sentence properly.

× I use the music to express my feelings too. Explore them actually.

✓ I use music to express my feelings too and actually explore them.

The fragment 'Explore them actually' lacks a subject and verb; combining it with the previous sentence corrects the structure.