Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but has several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases that affect clarity. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid fragmented sentences and improve coherence by using linking words properly. For example, instead of 'Singing my favorite songs instantly list my MOT,' you could say 'Singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, especially when I feel stressed. For example, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood. Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with other students during social gatherings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Focus on answering the question directly and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid irrelevant or confusing information. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I enjoy listening to music. Listening to my favorite songs helps me feel more relaxed and reduces my stress. For example, when I listen to music, I feel happier and more motivated.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward expressions. Try to answer the question directly with clear sentences. Explain your feelings with appropriate vocabulary and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: That's a difficult question because I am quite introverted. I usually prefer to sing alone since I feel more comfortable expressing myself when no one is watching. Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy the moment without feeling self-conscious.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad, singing helps boost my mood even if I don't have a good voice.

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, for example when I feeling stressed.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, for example when I feel stressed.

The verb 'feeling' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'feel' to match the present tense and subject 'I'. The phrase 'when I feel stressed' correctly expresses a present condition.

× Singing my favorite songs instantly list my MOT.

✓ Singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'List my MOT' is unclear and likely a typo. The correct phrase is 'lifts my mood' to express the intended meaning that singing improves emotional state.

× Additionally. It's a fun way to connect with other students social gatherings.

✓ Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with other students at social gatherings.

The sentence is fragmented and missing a preposition. 'Additionally.' should be connected with the next sentence using a comma. Also, 'students social gatherings' needs the preposition 'at' to indicate location.

× No, I have never learned have to sync before but I will enjoy listening to music.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing before but I enjoy listening to music.

The phrase 'have to sync' is incorrect; it should be 'how to sing'. Also, 'will enjoy' is inappropriate here because the enjoyment is ongoing, so 'enjoy' in present tense is correct.

× It has been feel more relaxed success wise Rd. today and it also reduced my stress levels.

✓ It has made me feel more relaxed and successful today, and it has also reduced my stress levels.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and unclear wording. 'Has been feel' is incorrect; it should be 'has made me feel'. 'Success wise Rd.' is unclear and likely a typo; 'successful' fits the context better.

× For example when I listen to my favorite songs I feel much happier and motivated.

✓ For example, when I listen to my favorite songs, I feel much happier and motivated.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas after 'For example' and 'songs' for proper punctuation and clarity.

× It's really awkward question because I usually sing about you to my introverted personality.

✓ It's a really awkward question because I usually sing alone due to my introverted personality.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Sing about you to my introverted personality' is confusing. The correction clarifies that the student sings alone because of being introverted.

× I feel more comfortable expressing my soul when no one is watching and singing alone.

✓ I feel more comfortable expressing myself when no one is watching and I am singing alone.

'Expressing my soul' is unusual; 'expressing myself' is more natural. Also, the sentence needs 'I am' before 'singing alone' for correct structure.

× Helps me relax and enjoy the moment without feeling self cost vicious.

✓ It helps me relax and enjoy the moment without feeling self-conscious.

The sentence is a fragment missing a subject. 'Self cost vicious' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'self-conscious'.

× Yes, in my opinion singing can bring happiness to people from some when I feel sad.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, singing can bring happiness to people, especially when I feel sad.

The phrase 'from some when I feel sad' is unclear and incorrect. Adding 'especially' clarifies the meaning that singing helps when feeling sad.

× I singing so I need something my mood boost the maximum level even I have bad voice.

✓ I sing because I need something to boost my mood to the maximum level, even though I have a bad voice.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'I singing' should be 'I sing'; 'something my mood boost' is incorrect and should be 'something to boost my mood'; 'even I have bad voice' should be 'even though I have a bad voice' for correct conjunction and article usage.