Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Absolutely like singing because my servant is good and I'm like, I'm so good at singing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, actually no, actually no. But I would know. My mom sings ever like notice or like I will notice her voice and I will learn how to sync from her.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I will sing for my mom and dad.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yeah, well, like like happy songs and relaxing sun skinbringlike.com and. Make people smile.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and relevant reason for liking singing. Avoid confusing or irrelevant words like 'servant'. Use simple, natural sentences and explain why you enjoy singing.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Singing makes me feel happy and confident.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Explain how you learn singing if you haven't taken formal lessons, using simple and coherent sentences.
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons. However, I often listen to my mom sing and try to imitate her voice to improve my singing skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a reason or more details to make it more interesting and complete.
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom and dad because they always support me, and singing for them makes me feel happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Try to speak clearly and avoid filler words. Give a complete and logical answer with examples or reasons why singing can bring happiness.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because happy songs can lift people's mood and help them relax, making them smile and feel joyful.
× Absolutely like singing because my servant is good and I'm like, I'm so good at singing.
✓ I absolutely like singing because my voice is good and I'm so good at singing.
The word 'servant' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'voice'. Also, 'absolutely like singing' needs the adverb 'absolutely' before the verb 'like' for correct emphasis. The phrase 'I'm like, I'm so good at singing' is informal and redundant; simplifying to 'I'm so good at singing' improves clarity.
× No, actually no, actually no. But I would know. My mom sings ever like notice or like I will notice her voice and I will learn how to sync from her.
✓ No, actually no. But I would know. My mom always sings, and I notice her voice and learn how to sing from her.
The phrase 'My mom sings ever like notice' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Ever' should be 'always' to indicate frequency. 'Notice' should be in present tense 'notice' to match the habitual action. 'Sync' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'sing'. The sentence is corrected to reflect habitual actions in present tense.
× I will sing for my mom and dad.
✓ I will sing for my mom and dad.
This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriately uses the future tense 'will sing' to express intention.
× Yeah, well, like like happy songs and relaxing sun skinbringlike.com and. Make people smile.
✓ Yeah, well, happy songs and relaxing songs make people smile.
The original sentence contains repeated words, nonsensical phrases like 'sun skinbringlike.com', and sentence fragments. The corrected sentence removes irrelevant parts and forms a complete, clear sentence expressing the intended meaning.