Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达，使用更自然的语言表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I enjoy listening to music. When I sing, I imagine myself as a singer, which helps me feel more confident and in control.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因，避免无关内容，使用正确的时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing because my studies are very busy, and I don't have time to attend professional singing classes.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议先明确主题句，然后用具体细节支持，表达感谢和情感时用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mom because she works very hard at the hospital and takes care of our family. Singing for her is my way to thank her for all her efforts.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，具体说明唱歌如何带来快乐，避免重复和不完整的句子。

Ví dụ: Of course, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax their bodies and minds. When people sing, they feel joyful and can express their emotions better.

× Yes, I like singing 'cause I like listening to the music, and when I listen to the music, I always imagine.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I like listening to music, and when I listen to music, I always imagine.

这里的'singing'和'listening'作为动名词使用是正确的，但'cause'是口语缩写，正式场合应使用'because'。另外，'the music'前的定冠词'the'不必要，应去掉。

× And how can I? How do I look when I was sending the music as the singer?

✓ And how can I? How do I look when I was singing the music as the singer?

这里'sending'应为'singing'，因为表达的是唱歌的动作，'sending'是发送的意思，属于词汇错误。

× I haven't learned how to sing becauses my study.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing because of my studies.

'because'后面应接原因，'because of'后面接名词短语，'my study'应改为复数形式'studies'，表示学习任务。

× Korea is very busy and I don't have the time to attend the. Professional class for sign in.

✓ Korea is very busy and I don't have the time to attend professional singing classes.

'attend the. Professional class for sign in'结构不完整且用词错误，应改为'attend professional singing classes'，'sign in'应为'singing'。

× Also my mom and dad Shanks. That's not important.

✓ Also, my mom and dad think that's not important.

'Shanks'应为'think'，且句子缺少谓语动词，需补充。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

该句无语法错误，符合语法规则。

× I want to sing for my mom because I sing. That her life, about the hospital, about her work, about the family is really boring and it's really a kind of hardship for her and I want to send him to Shank her.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because I think her life, about the hospital, about her work, about the family is really boring and it's really a kind of hardship for her and I want to sing to thank her.

'send him to Shank her'应为'sing to thank her'，原句中'send'和'Shank'用词错误，且句子结构混乱。

× Hard work for the family and. Her effort to make this family better?

✓ Her hard work for the family and her effort to make this family better.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，且断句错误，应合并为完整句子。

× Of course I think xining can bring happiness to people because when people are singing the relaxed their body, their brain get more.

✓ Of course I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people are singing, they relax their body, their brain gets more.

'xining'应为'singing'，'the relaxed their body'应为'they relax their body'，主谓一致错误，'brain get'应为'brain gets'。

× Happiness, happy feelings and. When people are relaxing, they can have more time to sing about about themselves, but not only.

✓ Happiness, happy feelings. When people are relaxing, they can have more time to think about themselves, not only sing.

'sing about about themselves'重复且用词不当，应改为'think about themselves'，句子结构需调整使其通顺。