Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Why? Actually, I'm not very confident in my singing ability.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Yes, I ever learn. How to assemble 'cause I'm always want to sing a song like a day last week all learned every.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I just want to say for my family. My friend and my boyfriend.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course be causing is a pressure ability. I think.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိရန် ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစေရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ သင်၏စကားပြောမှုတွင် မေးခွန်းကို တိုက်ရိုက်ဖြေဆိုခြင်းမရှိသဖြင့် အဓိကအကြောင်းအရာကို ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစေရန် လိုအပ်သည်။
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing, but I am not very confident in my singing ability, so I usually sing only when I am alone.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျမှုနှင့် စကားလုံးအသုံးအနှုန်းမှန်ကန်မှု မရှိပါ။ စကားလုံးများကို သေချာစွာ အသုံးပြု၍ တိကျသော အကြောင်းအရာကို ဖော်ပြရန် လိုအပ်သည်။
Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken singing lessons recently because I want to improve my skills and sing better.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: အဖြေသည် တိုက်ရိုက်ဖြေဆိုထားသော်လည်း စကားလုံးအသုံးအနှုန်းနှင့် သဘာဝကျမှုကို တိုးတက်စေရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ ပိုမိုအသေးစိတ် ဖော်ပြခြင်းဖြင့် အကြောင်းအရာကို ပိုမိုထိရောက်စေပါ။
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family, friends, and my boyfriend because they always support me and enjoy my singing.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: အဖြေသည် မရှင်းလင်းသည့် စကားလုံးများနှင့် သဘောတရား မပြည့်စုံမှုရှိသည်။ ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းပြီး သက်ဆိုင်ရာ အကြောင်းအရာများကို အသုံးပြု၍ ဖြေဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and lifts their mood.
× Yes, I ever learn.
✓ Yes, I have learned.
The sentence uses 'ever learn' incorrectly. The correct past tense form with present perfect is 'have learned' to indicate experience up to now. 'Ever' is used with present perfect, not simple past.
× How to assemble 'cause I'm always want to sing a song like a day last week all learned every.
✓ I learned how to sing because I always want to sing songs, like last week.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks proper sentence structure and verb forms. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear, grammatical form expressing the intended meaning.
× I just want to say for my family.
✓ I just want to sing for my family.
The verb 'say' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'sing for my family'. Also, 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate the audience of singing.
× My friend and my boyfriend.
✓ My friends and my boyfriend.
If referring to more than one friend, 'friends' (plural) is correct. If only one friend, original is acceptable. Assuming plural for naturalness.
× Yes, of course be causing is a pressure ability. I think.
✓ Yes, of course, singing can relieve pressure, I think.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning that singing can reduce pressure, using correct sentence structure and vocabulary.