Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Oh, I don't like singing because my voice is not good.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
Come in my life, I have never learned to sync.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
If I have a chance for singing, will now first and I. I need to. I want to seeing. Billie Eilish.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
If the person like singing that bring happiness, that person people but but I don't like seeing yes.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Та илүү тодорхой, энгийн бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, so I feel shy to sing in front of others."
Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good, so I feel shy to sing in front of others.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү ойлгомжтой, зөв бүтэцтэй болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "No, I have never learned how to sing properly in my life."
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing properly in my life.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа ойлгомжтой, логик холбоотой, бүрэн өгүүлбэрээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "If I have a chance to sing, I would like to sing for my family first because they support me. Also, I admire Billie Eilish as a singer."
Ví dụ: If I have a chance to sing, I would like to sing for my family first because they support me. Also, I admire Billie Eilish as a singer.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой, ойлгомжтой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people who enjoy it, but personally, I don't like singing."
Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people who enjoy it, but personally, I don't like singing.
× Come in my life, I have never learned to sync.
✓ In my life, I have never learned to sing.
The phrase 'Come in my life' is incorrect; it should be 'In my life' to indicate experience. Also, 'sync' is a wrong word here; the correct verb is 'sing'. The sentence uses present perfect tense correctly to express experience up to now.
× If I have a chance for singing, will now first and I. I need to. I want to seeing. Billie Eilish.
✓ If I have a chance to sing, I will sing first. I want to see Billie Eilish.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Will now first and I' is not a proper structure. 'I want to seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to see'. The corrected sentence uses proper conditional and future tense structures and correct verb forms.
× If the person like singing that bring happiness, that person people but but I don't like seeing yes.
✓ If a person likes singing, it brings happiness to them, but I don't like singing.
The sentence has pronoun errors and unclear references. 'That person people' is incorrect; it should be 'it brings happiness to them'. Also, 'like seeing yes' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'. The corrected sentence clarifies pronoun use and verb agreement.