Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there is some confusion in the example part which affects clarity. Try to avoid vague pronouns like "them" and ensure your examples directly support your main idea. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress after a long day. For example, I often sing with my friends during picnics, which allows us to share our passion for music and enjoy each other's company.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and some hesitation which affects fluency. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I have taken" instead of "I have took") and try to form complete sentences without unnecessary pauses. Also, link your ideas smoothly to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken some singing courses to improve my skills. I first started learning when I was a kid because singing was part of our school curriculum.

Gợi ý: There are some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes in your answer. Avoid using unclear words like "caution" when you mean "question". Also, express your ideas clearly and avoid fragmented sentences. Try to use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

Ví dụ: That's a great question. If I had the chance, I would like to sing romantic songs for my husband to express my emotions and the love I have for him.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to avoid short, choppy sentences. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, singing can bring joy to people because it helps relieve stress and allows them to express their feelings and emotions effectively.

× For example, I often see them with friends during picnics, which helps us share our passion for music.

✓ For example, I often sing with friends during picnics, which helps us share our passion for music.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used here because it does not clearly refer to any noun previously mentioned. The intended meaning is likely that the speaker sings with friends, so replacing 'see them' with 'sing' clarifies the sentence and corrects the pronoun misuse.

× Yes I have. I have took some courses and classes.

✓ Yes, I have. I have taken some courses and classes.

The verb 'took' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' (present perfect), the past participle form 'taken' should be used. Using 'have took' is grammatically incorrect; the correct form is 'have taken'.

× To improve my skills.

✓ I took these courses to improve my skills.

'To improve my skills.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rewritten as a complete sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Uhm, I remember the the first time I ever started that when I was a kid and it was a, it was our school curriculum.

✓ Uhm, I remember the first time I ever started that when I was a kid; it was part of our school curriculum.

The sentence is awkward and contains repetition ('the the') and unclear phrasing. Removing the repeated word and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× Well, that's a great caution.

✓ Well, that's a great question.

The word 'caution' is incorrectly used here; the intended word is likely 'question'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning rather than grammar, but it is important for clarity.

× I think if I would get a chance, I would like to sing for my husband.

✓ I think if I got a chance, I would like to sing for my husband.

In conditional sentences expressing hypothetical situations, the correct form is 'if I got' (simple past) rather than 'if I would get'. Using 'would' in the 'if' clause is incorrect.

× Like, oh, very romantic.

✓ Like, oh, a very romantic song.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a noun to complete the thought. Adding 'a very romantic song' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Song tricks press my emotions and my feelings and for all the love that I have for my husband.

✓ Songs express my emotions and feelings and all the love that I have for my husband.

The phrase 'Song tricks press' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended is 'Songs express'. Also, 'my emotions and my feelings' is redundant; 'emotions and feelings' suffice. The preposition 'for' before 'all the love' is unnecessary here.

× Singing can bring a joy to people.

✓ Singing can bring joy to people.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the uncountable noun 'joy'. 'Joy' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'.