Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并给出具体原因，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing very much because it is a big part of my life and my job. Singing makes me happy and helps me earn money.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清，语法错误较多，建议使用简单句子表达学习经历，并具体说明老师的建议和自己的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was younger, my teacher told me that to sing well, I needed to use my heart and emotions. I found this advice very interesting and it helped me improve.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，建议直接说明想和谁一起唱歌，并解释原因，注意句子结构和词汇准确性。

Ví dụ: I want to sing with my father because he loves singing and often sings loudly. He always supports me, so I enjoy singing with him.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱，词汇使用错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持，如唱歌能减压、带来自信。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and makes people feel more confident and relaxed.

× I'm a big fan of singing because that was the part of my walk and.

✓ I'm a big fan of singing because it is part of my work.

句子结构混乱，'that was the part of my walk and'不通顺，应改为'it is part of my work'，表达清晰且符合语境。

× Is my occupation.

✓ It is my occupation.

缺少主语，句子不完整，应加上主语'It'使句子完整。

× We have all the child.

✓ I have been singing since I was a child.

原句语法和表达均错误，推测想表达从小唱歌，应改为'I have been singing since I was a child'。

× I was better than others.

✓ I was better than others at singing.

句子缺少比较的具体内容，补充'at singing'使表达完整。

× So I'm now I'm very like thing.

✓ So now I really like singing.

表达混乱，'very like thing'不正确，应改为'really like singing'。

× It can help me to or many money.

✓ It can help me to earn money.

句子结构错误，'or many money'无意义，应改为'earn money'表达正确。

× Yes, I have learned how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× Oh, when I was younger my teacher told me you that you want to sing well you needed to use a hard and emotions to is express sell.

✓ Oh, when I was younger, my teacher told me that if I wanted to sing well, I needed to work hard and use emotions to express myself.

句子结构混乱，语法错误，'you that you want'应为'that if I wanted'，'a hard'应为'work hard'，'to is express sell'应为'to express myself'。

× I found this otherwise very interesting and it helped me improve allowed.

✓ I found this very interesting and it helped me improve a lot.

'otherwise'用错，'allowed'应为'a lot'，句子应简洁明了。

× I want to sing the song with my father because my father is a big fat.

✓ I want to sing a song with my father because my father is a big fan of singing.

'big fat'应为'big fan'，且冠词使用错误，'the song'改为'a song'更合适。

× and he very loud to singing at various support to me.

✓ and he sings very loudly and supports me in various ways.

副词位置错误，'very loud to singing'应改为'sings very loudly'，句子结构调整使表达清晰。

× So I want to sing with my father.

✓ So I want to sing with my father.

句子正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I think I think I'm very happy and happiness to everyone be 'cause seein colors, straight stresses and make.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to everyone because it relieves stress and makes people confident.

句子结构混乱，表达不完整，'seein colors, straight stresses and make'无意义，应改为'relieves stress and makes people confident'。

× Confidence to everyone, so I think the income bring happy and relax for everybody.

✓ It brings confidence to everyone, so I think singing brings happiness and relaxation to everybody.

'the income'用错，应为'singing'，'bring happy and relax'应为'brings happiness and relaxation'，语法和词汇错误。