Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有很多发音和用词错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你注意发音，尤其是单词'singing'和'confident'，并且避免使用不正确的词汇。回答时要简洁明了，直接表达自己的观点，并用简单的句子支持观点。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I feel shy and nervous when I sing in front of others. However, I know some people enjoy singing because they have good vocal skills and feel confident.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议你练习使用正确的时态和句子结构，确保句子完整。同时，回答时要具体说明学习唱歌的经历和感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. However, I didn't enjoy it because the music teacher was very strict, which made me feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了基本意思，但有语法和用词错误。建议你注意冠词和复数形式的使用，避免重复词汇，并且使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my dad because he loves singing. Sharing this hobby with him would help us bond and enjoy time together.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，影响理解。建议你使用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免使用不正确的词汇和结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can cheer them up and make them feel better.

× I don't like saying because I'm quite interefere and shined and is why I don't like singing in front of others people.

✓ I don't like singing because I'm quite nervous and shy, and that's why I don't like singing in front of other people.

原句中使用了错误的形容词“interefere”和“shined”，应使用表示情绪状态的形容词“nervous”和“shy”。此外，“others people”应为“other people”，形容词修饰名词时用“other”。

× But I do know that some people like saying because they they got a good focal Ann.

✓ But I do know that some people like singing because they have a good vocal tone.

原句中“saying”应为“singing”，且“focal Ann”应为“vocal tone”，正确表达唱歌时的声音质量。

× This is why they like singing and they're quite convoluted and stuff like that.

✓ This is why they like singing and they're quite confident and stuff like that.

“convoluted”意为复杂的，与语境不符，应改为“confident”表示自信。

× Yes, yeah, I've learned how the saying when I was in the primary school, but that is definitely not the good memory for me because the music teachers was quite harsh for all the students.

✓ Yes, yeah, I've learned how to sing when I was in primary school, but that is definitely not a good memory for me because the music teachers were quite harsh to all the students.

“the saying”应为“to sing”，动词不定式用法错误；“the primary school”前不需要定冠词；“was”应改为复数“were”，与复数主语“teachers”保持一致；“not the good memory”应为“not a good memory”，冠词使用错误；“harsh for”应为“harsh to”，介词使用错误。

× So that's why it makes me.

✓ So that's why it affected me.

原句缺少宾语，导致句子结构不完整，应补充动词宾语使句子完整。

× I would say I would like to sing for my dad because he loves singing an I think that if we both share a saying UM hobbies like singing that we could share a lot with each others.

✓ I would say I would like to sing for my dad because he loves singing and I think that if we both share a singing hobby like singing, we could share a lot with each other.

“an”应为“and”；“share a saying UM hobbies”表达混乱，应为“share a singing hobby”；“each others”应为“each other”，反身代词使用错误。

× Yeah, definitely. I I would say saying can bring happiness to people because, you know, singing is so special to bring up. No kind of power to people to cheer people up and make them in obeying.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I would say singing can bring happiness to people because, you know, singing is so special to uplift people. It has the power to cheer people up and make them happy.

“saying”应为“singing”；“bring up”用法不当，应为“uplift”；“No kind of power”表达错误，应为“It has the power”；“make them in obeying”语法错误，应为“make them happy”。