Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"they made me"应为"it makes me"，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用简单且正确的句型表达喜爱唱歌的原因，同时避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答简短且不完整，缺少完整句子结构。建议用完整句子表达，并适当扩展说明对学习唱歌的兴趣。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learnt how to sing, but I would love to learn in the future.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如"support me and support me to learning saying"，且句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的语法表达支持的意义，并简洁明了地说明想为父母唱歌的原因。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because they always support me and encourage me to be confident.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰，且有多处拼写错误。建议用简单明了的句子表达唱歌带来快乐的观点，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and enjoy life.

× Yes, I do, because they made me very happy and made me really relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do, because it makes me very happy and makes me really relaxed.

这里的主语是单数的"I"，所以动词应该用单数形式"makes"，而不是复数形式"made"。另外，时态应与现在时态保持一致。

× No. But I love to.

✓ No. But I love to sing.

"love to"后面需要跟动词原形，这里缺少动词"sing"，导致句子不完整。

× I want sing for my parents because they always support me and support me to learning saying confidently so I want to sing for them.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because they always support me and help me learn to sing confidently, so I want to sing for them.

"want sing"缺少不定式标志"to"，"support me to learning saying"结构错误，应改为"help me learn to sing"。句子过长且缺少逗号，影响理解。

× Saying not only bring hapiness to people, also also make them. Climb and. Made them enjoy a boy in the life.

✓ Singing not only brings happiness to people, but also makes them calm and makes them enjoy life.

"Saying"应为"Singing"，动词"bring"应为第三人称单数形式"brings"，"make"应为"makes"。"Climb"应为"calm"，"Made them enjoy a boy in the life"语义不清，改为"makes them enjoy life"更通顺。