Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really like seeing, I think saying help me release my stress and I like to go to the Katie way with my friends in my leisure time. I think is a good way to take away my stress.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't thought about you because I don't have a Thailand bar saying so and my parents having to consider about that quite sure. So I don't have a chance to learn how to sing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I haven't thought about that problem, but when I consider that I think I want you sing for myself since I don't have a talent about saying I just oh seem to realize messages. So I don't need to sing for anyone. I just think.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sing saying can definitely bring happiness to people because one we saying we don't need to think about everything like our problem, our pressure and the stress. We just choose thing.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有较多发音和拼写错误(如'seeing'应为'singing','saying'应为'singing'),影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强发音练习,避免拼写错误,同时回答应更简洁,避免重复表达相同意思。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relieve stress. I often go to karaoke with my friends during my free time, which is a great way to relax.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够连贯,存在语法和表达错误,导致难以理解。建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并用简单明了的语言说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I never had the opportunity or interest to take singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,语法错误较多,建议先明确回答问题,然后用简洁的句子说明理由,避免使用不确定或模糊的表达。
Ví dụ: I haven't really thought about it, but if I had to choose, I would sing for myself because I don't consider myself a good singer.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型,清晰表达观点,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because when we sing, we can forget about our problems and stress for a while.
× Yes, I really like seeing, I think saying help me release my stress and I like to go to the Katie way with my friends in my leisure time.
✓ Yes, I really like singing, I think singing helps me release my stress and I like to go to the karaoke with my friends in my leisure time.
动词后面接动名词时,应该使用正确的动名词形式。这里'seeing'应为'singing','saying'应为'singing',且动词help后面应加第三人称单数形式helps。
× Yes, I really like seeing, I think saying help me release my stress and I like to go to the Katie way with my friends in my leisure time.
✓ Yes, I really like singing, I think singing helps me release my stress and I like to go to the karaoke with my friends in my leisure time.
主语是第三人称单数时,谓语动词应加-s。这里'saying help'应改为'singing helps'。
× I like to go to the Katie way with my friends in my leisure time.
✓ I like to go to the karaoke with my friends in my leisure time.
'Katie way'应为'karaoke',且介词使用正确应为'go to the karaoke'。
× No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't thought about you because I don't have a Thailand bar saying so and my parents having to consider about that quite sure.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't thought about it because I don't have a Thailand bar singing so and my parents have to consider that, so I'm not sure.
时态使用不当,'haven't thought about you'应为'haven't thought about it','having to consider'应为'have to consider'。
× No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't thought about you because I don't have a Thailand bar saying so and my parents having to consider about that quite sure.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I haven't thought about it because I don't have a Thailand bar singing so and my parents have to consider that, so I'm not sure.
代词使用错误,'you'应为'it',指代前文的事情。
× Who do you want to sing for? Student: I haven't thought about that problem, but when I consider that I think I want you sing for myself since I don't have a talent about saying I just oh seem to realize messages.
✓ I haven't thought about that problem, but when I consider it, I think I want to sing for myself since I don't have a talent for singing, I just seem to realize messages.
代词使用错误,'you sing'应为'to sing','about saying'应为'for singing'。
× I think I want you sing for myself since I don't have a talent about saying I just oh seem to realize messages.
✓ I think I want to sing for myself since I don't have a talent for singing, I just seem to realize messages.
介词使用错误,'about saying'应为'for singing'。
× Yes, I sing saying can definitely bring happiness to people because one we saying we don't need to think about everything like our problem, our pressure and the stress.
✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because when we sing we don't need to think about everything like our problems, our pressure and the stress.
动词后接动名词时应使用正确形式,'sing saying'应为'singing',且句子中缺少连词'when'。
× Yes, I sing saying can definitely bring happiness to people because one we saying we don't need to think about everything like our problem, our pressure and the stress.
✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because when we sing we don't need to think about everything like our problems, our pressure and the stress.
代词使用错误,'one we saying'应为'when we sing'。
× Yes, I sing saying can definitely bring happiness to people because one we saying we don't need to think about everything like our problem, our pressure and the stress.
✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because when we sing we don't need to think about everything like our problems, our pressure and the stress.
名词单复数错误,'problem'应为'problems',因为指多个问题。