Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like singing with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am with my friends. It allows me to express myself freely and feel relaxed. Moreover, singing together creates a joyful atmosphere, which makes the experience even better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, explain your learning experience with more specific details and use linking words to organize your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned some singing techniques from my friends who are professional singers. They often give me advice on how to improve my voice, such as singing slowly and focusing on pitch. Their guidance has helped me a lot.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but a bit confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect sentences.

Ví dụ: If I had to sing for someone, I would choose my little brother. He is very supportive and never judges me, even though I am not a great singer. I know he would enjoy listening to me sing, which makes me feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relieve stress and express their emotions. For example, when someone feels sad or depressed, singing can be a way to release those feelings and feel better.

× Yes, I do like singing when it mostly when I'm with my friends or when I'm out with my friend.

✓ Yes, I do like singing, mostly when I'm with my friends or when I'm out with my friends.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and redundancy with 'when it mostly when'. The correction removes unnecessary words and corrects 'friend' to plural 'friends' for consistency. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× An I love singing 'cause I feel like I could be myself and I could, you know, sing my heart out.

✓ And I love singing because I feel like I can be myself and, you know, sing my heart out.

The original sentence uses 'An' instead of 'And' and 'could' which is less appropriate here. 'Could' is changed to 'can' to express ability in present tense. Also, 'cause' is expanded to 'because' for formality and clarity.

× Yes, I do have learn about singing 'cause my friends are professional singers and they are very good at singing.

✓ Yes, I have learned about singing because my friends are professional singers and they are very good at singing.

The phrase 'do have learn' is incorrect. The correct past participle 'learned' is used with 'have' to form present perfect tense. Also, 'cause' is expanded to 'because' for clarity.

× So whenever I am singing in my flow flow the teachers me like you know go with this and that and saying like in better slow one or that one so.

✓ So whenever I am singing in my flow, the teachers tell me, like, you know, to go with this and that, and say things like 'a better slow one' or that one.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper verbs and punctuation. The correction adds missing verbs ('tell'), punctuation, and clarifies the meaning for better understanding.

× If I have to sing for somebody then I would like to thank for my brother little brother 'cause he would be the one who will never judge me about my bad ways as I don't have that much good voice to sing.

✓ If I have to sing for somebody, then I would like to thank my little brother because he would be the one who will never judge me for my bad singing since I don't have a very good voice.

The phrase 'thank for my brother little brother' is incorrect; 'thank my little brother' is correct. Also, 'judge me about my bad ways' is unclear and changed to 'judge me for my bad singing'. 'That much good voice' is corrected to 'a very good voice' for natural expression.

× An I know that for the fact that he will enjoy with me when I will sing.

✓ And I know for a fact that he will enjoy it when I sing.

'An' is corrected to 'And'. The phrase 'know that for the fact' is simplified to 'know for a fact'. 'Enjoy with me' is incorrect; 'enjoy it' is appropriate. 'When I will sing' is corrected to 'when I sing' to match present/future context.

× So that would be my brother who will never judge me.

✓ So that would be my brother who will never judge me.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Yeah, I really think singing can bring happiness to people 'cause some people out there are very depressed in their own way.

✓ Yeah, I really think singing can bring happiness to people because some people out there are very depressed in their own way.

'Cause' is expanded to 'because' for clarity and formality. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× So I feel like music really helps people to get out of it, get rid of stressful things.

✓ So I feel like music really helps people get out of it and get rid of stressful things.

The phrase 'helps people to get' is acceptable but 'helps people get' is more natural. Added 'and' to connect the two actions properly.

× So I think singing is something which through which they can let their emotion go out there, sadness go out.

✓ So I think singing is something through which they can let their emotions and sadness out.

The original sentence is awkward and redundant. 'Something which through which' is incorrect; simplified to 'something through which'. 'Emotion' is pluralized to 'emotions' for natural usage. The phrase 'go out there' is unnecessary and removed.