Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating your opinion and supporting it with a reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it is very flavorful and sweet, and I have a strong preference for sweet foods.

Gợi ý: Avoid using filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words such as 'although' effectively to connect your ideas. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and make it more structured.

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate about twice a day. Although I know it is not very healthy to eat too much, I enjoy its sweet taste and it helps me feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Avoid excessive use of filler words and incomplete sentences. Make sure your answer is complete and clear, with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I was fond of chocolate since my childhood. I used to eat it twice or more times a day when I was a kid.

Gợi ý: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is rich, flavorful, and sweet. Almost all children and young people enjoy eating it, which makes it universally liked.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and concisely.

Ví dụ: My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it has a balanced taste of bitterness and sweetness.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think giving chocolate as a gift is a good idea because almost everyone, including children and adults, likes chocolate. Therefore, it is a better gift choice than many other items.

× I like to eat chocolate because uh, chocolate is very flavorful and sweet as I am very, umm, sweet lover, so I love to eat chocolate.

✓ I like to eat chocolate because, uh, chocolate is very flavorful and sweet, and I am a big sweet lover, so I love to eat chocolate.

The phrase 'very, umm, sweet lover' is incorrect because 'sweet lover' is a noun phrase that needs a quantifier or determiner. Using 'a big sweet lover' correctly quantifies the noun and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Although I know eating too much chocolate is not good for my health, I really enjoy its sweet taste and it helps me feel relaxed.

✓ Although I know eating too much chocolate is not good for my health, I really enjoy its sweet taste and it helps me to feel relaxed.

The verb 'helps' is often followed by 'to' before the base verb. Adding 'to' before 'feel' makes the sentence more grammatically correct and natural.

× Yes, uh, from my childhood, I was, uh, fond of chocolate.

✓ Yes, uh, since my childhood, I have been, uh, fond of chocolate.

The preposition 'from' is less appropriate here; 'since' is used to indicate a starting point in time continuing to the present. Also, the present perfect tense 'have been' fits better to express a continuing state from childhood to now.

× I, uh, used to eat chocolate twice or even more in a day.

✓ I, uh, used to eat chocolate twice or even more times a day.

The phrase 'twice or even more' is incomplete; 'more times' clarifies the quantity. Also, 'in a day' is better expressed as 'a day' without 'in' for frequency.

× So from my childhood in nowadays, I.

✓ So from my childhood until now, I have liked chocolate.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'From my childhood until now' correctly expresses the time span, and completing the sentence with 'I have liked chocolate' makes it grammatically correct.

× As chocolate is rich, flavorful and sweet, almost each and every children and even young girls love to eat chocolate.

✓ As chocolate is rich, flavorful and sweet, almost every child and even young girls love to eat chocolate.

The phrase 'each and every children' is incorrect because 'children' is plural and 'each and every' requires a singular noun. Changing 'children' to 'child' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× So everyone likes chocolate.

✓ So everyone likes chocolate.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Uh, my favorite flavour, uh, of chocolate is dark chocolate because uh, dark chocolate is a bit uh, bitter, but not uh, too much sweet.

✓ Uh, my favorite flavour, uh, of chocolate is dark chocolate because, uh, dark chocolate is a bit, uh, bitter, but not too sweet.

The phrase 'too much sweet' is incorrect; 'too sweet' is the correct adjective form to describe taste intensity.

× It enhance the uh, sweet and bitter evenly.

✓ It enhances the, uh, sweet and bitter flavors evenly.

The verb 'enhance' should be in third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, adding 'flavors' clarifies the meaning.

× So my favorite chocolate is.

✓ So my favorite chocolate is dark chocolate.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'dark chocolate' completes the thought and makes it grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think gifting chocolate is uh, good because chocolate is almost every children, even adults like to eat chocolate.

✓ Yes, I think gifting chocolate is, uh, good because almost every child, even adults, likes to eat chocolate.

The phrase 'chocolate is almost every children' is incorrect. It should be 'almost every child' to match singular form with 'every'. Also, 'likes' agrees with singular subject 'every child'.

× So a gifting chocolate is much better than, uh gifting others things.

✓ So gifting chocolate is much better than, uh, gifting other things.

The phrase 'a gifting chocolate' is incorrect; 'gifting chocolate' is better. Also, 'others things' should be 'other things' as 'other' is the correct adjective here.