Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

× However, there is wafer in it which enhance the flavoring of the chocolate.

✓ However, there is wafer in it which enhances the flavoring of the chocolate.

The subject 'wafer' is singular, so the verb should be 'enhances' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Personally, I would consume chocolate every day because there's a stock place in my fridge where I'm able to grab whenever I want.

✓ Personally, I consume chocolate every day because there's a stock place in my fridge where I can grab some whenever I want.

Using 'would' here implies a conditional or hypothetical situation, but the context is about a habitual action, so the simple present 'consume' is appropriate. Also, 'I'm able to grab' is better expressed as 'I can grab' for natural modal verb usage.

× My mother said I'm only able to eat chocolate when I do something that helps around the house, especially doing chores like washing the dishes or folding laundry.

✓ My mother said I was only able to eat chocolate when I did something that helped around the house, especially chores like washing the dishes or folding laundry.

The reported speech requires past tense forms to match the past reporting verb 'said'. Present tense verbs 'am', 'do', and 'helps' should be changed to past tense 'was', 'did', and 'helped' respectively.

× Then she would give me a price and that would be chocolate.

✓ Then she would give me a prize and that would be chocolate.

The word 'price' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'prize' which is singular and fits the context of a reward. This is a vocabulary error but also relates to singular/plural usage.

× Since there are different of sweetness to chocolate, I believe that it is extremely popular because the level of sugar you able to pick.

✓ Since there are different levels of sweetness in chocolate, I believe that it is extremely popular because of the level of sugar you are able to pick.

'Different' should be followed by a plural noun 'levels' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'you able to pick' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' for correct present tense.

× Like there are dark chocolate and milk chocolate.

✓ Like there is dark chocolate and milk chocolate.

'Chocolate' here is uncountable or singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree with the subject.

× If there's someone out there that doesn't like sweets or dessert, they would go for something that would be darker and.

✓ If there's someone out there who doesn't like sweets or dessert, they would go for something that is darker.

The sentence is incomplete and has a dangling conjunction 'and' at the end. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to a person. The corrected sentence completes the thought and fixes the relative pronoun.

× One of my favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate because it isn't too sweet nor it is too bitter.

✓ One of my favorite flavors of chocolate is milk chocolate because it isn't too sweet nor is it too bitter.

'Flavor' should be plural 'flavors' because it follows 'one of my favorite'. Also, the second clause needs inversion 'nor is it' for correct parallel structure.

× It is around the middle where I found it extremely enjoyable.

✓ It is around the middle where I find it extremely enjoyable.

The tense should be present 'find' to match the present tense 'is'. Also, 'where' is acceptable but 'which' could be clearer. The main issue is tense consistency.

× In my view, I believe that chocolate is one of the best gift you could give to your significant other because it is signifying your love for them, or you can get their personal favorite flavor as a gift showing that you love them very much.

✓ In my view, I believe that chocolate is one of the best gifts you could give to your significant other because it signifies your love for them, or you can get their personal favorite flavor as a gift showing that you love them very much.

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' after 'one of the best'. Also, 'is signifying' should be 'signifies' for correct present simple tense and subject-verb agreement.