Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢巧克力的原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且表达不够具体。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明巧克力如何让你放松和改善健康。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and helps me relax after a long day. Also, some chocolates contain antioxidants that are good for health.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达频率时应直接说明时间间隔。建议用简洁的句子表达吃巧克力的频率和原因，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate once a week because it makes me feel happier and gives me some energy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但语言表达不够流畅，有重复词汇。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child because my parents believed it would make me happy. Also, during festivals, people usually gave me chocolate as gifts.

Gợi ý: 回答不够具体，表达含糊且有重复。建议明确说明巧克力受欢迎的原因，使用具体词汇和逻辑连接词。

Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and can boost people's mood. Additionally, it provides energy which helps people feel healthier.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清，语法错误多，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地说明喜欢的口味及原因，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is orange chocolate because the citrus taste adds a refreshing twist to the usual chocolate flavour.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点和理由，但语言重复且不够自然。建议用更流畅的句子表达观点，避免重复，并具体说明巧克力作为礼物的优点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because it is considered a special treat and it can bring happiness to the person who receives it.

× I think chocolate is so sweet that it can let me feel relaxing, and I think some chocolate can improve my blood.

✓ I think chocolate is so sweet that it can make me feel relaxed, and I think some chocolate can improve my blood.

这里“feel relaxing”错误地使用了动词的现在分词形式，应该用形容词“relaxed”来描述感受。

× Maybe one week because I think it lot can let me fight and I eating chocolate for my healthy body and let me feel happier.

✓ Maybe once a week because I think a lot of it can help me fight illness, and I eat chocolate for my healthy body and to make me feel happier.

“one week”用法不当，应该用“once a week”表示频率；“it lot”缺少冠词和介词，应为“a lot of it”；“I eating”缺少助动词，应改为“I eat”。

× Maybe one week because I think it lot can let me fight and I eating chocolate for my healthy body and let me feel happier.

✓ Maybe once a week because I think a lot of it can help me fight illness, and I eat chocolate for my healthy body and to make me feel happier.

“I eating”错误地使用了动词的现在分词形式，缺少助动词，应使用一般现在时“I eat”。

× Another reason is if the festival will come in, somebody will will bring chocolate for me as the gift.

✓ Another reason is if the festival comes, somebody will bring chocolate for me as a gift.

条件句中不应使用“will”，应使用一般现在时“comes”；“will will”重复，应删去一个“will”；“the gift”应改为不定冠词“a gift”。

× Umm I think first and foremost the chocolate is mostly in your mouth and it can bring the happy to you and secondly I think in some in some situations the chocolate can bring your energy that make you healthier.

✓ Umm I think first and foremost chocolate is mostly in your mouth and it can bring happiness to you, and secondly I think in some situations chocolate can give you energy that makes you healthier.

“bring the happy”用法错误，应为“bring happiness”；“bring your energy”应为“give you energy”；“that make”主谓不一致，应为“that makes”。

× Maybe orange chocolate because I think orange can can eat some flavor in common chocolate and it can let me feel well I was eating a orange.

✓ Maybe orange chocolate because I think orange can add some flavor to common chocolate and it can make me feel like I am eating an orange.

“can can eat some flavor”表达错误，应为“can add some flavor”；“let me feel well”应为“make me feel like”；“a orange”冠词错误，应为“an orange”。

× Yes I do. So the first reason is chocolate is so expensive and we often bring gifts to others not so cheap.

✓ Yes I do. So the first reason is chocolate is expensive and we often bring gifts to others that are not cheap.

“not so cheap”表达不自然，应改为“that are not cheap”；“so expensive”中“so”可省略或改为“very”。

× And the second reason is chocolate can make make others happier.

✓ And the second reason is chocolate can make others happier.

“make make”重复，应删去一个“make”。