Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by directly stating your preference and reason. For example, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love eating chocolate because it satisfies my sweet cravings whenever I want something sugary.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit vague and could be clearer. Try to specify frequency and use more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy like "great and big craving."

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate a few times a week, especially when I have a strong craving for something sweet.

Gợi ý: There are grammatical errors and redundancy in your answer. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating the same idea. Make your answer more concise and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because most children love it, and I was no exception.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use singular/plural forms correctly and explain your ideas more specifically. Also, try to use linking words to connect your points.

Ví dụ: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because of its sweet flavour and smooth texture, which many people enjoy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural. Avoid unnecessary words like "made-up of" and focus on clear, concise descriptions.

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is Milky Bar because it has a creamy milk taste that I find delicious.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs better organisation and grammar. Avoid filler words like "Uh" and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about why chocolate makes a good gift.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. In my country, people often give chocolate as gifts to loved ones because it is sweet and symbolizes sharing happiness.

× Yes, I am a chocolate lover because whenever I want to eat sweet so I prefer chocolate.

✓ Yes, I am a chocolate lover because whenever I want to eat something sweet, I prefer chocolate.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to the incorrect use of 'so' after 'whenever I want to eat sweet'. The word 'so' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Also, 'eat sweet' is incorrect; it should be 'eat something sweet' to specify the object. The corrected sentence removes 'so' and adds 'something' to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often eat chocolate when I have a great and big craving of it.

✓ I often eat chocolate when I have a strong craving for it.

The phrase 'great and big craving' is awkward and unidiomatic. 'Strong craving' is the correct collocation. Also, the preposition 'of' is incorrect here; it should be 'for'. The adverb 'often' is correctly placed before the verb 'eat'.

× Yes, I oftenly eat chocolate when I was a kid because kids love the chocolate most so I am also a kid at that time so I love the chocolate.

✓ Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because kids love chocolate the most, and I was also a kid at that time, so I loved chocolate.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. The verb tense should be past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was a kid'. The phrase 'the chocolate most' should be 'chocolate the most'. The sentence also has run-on issues; adding commas and conjunctions improves clarity and structure.

× I think chocolate is popular around the world because of its flavored sweetness and their structure.

✓ I think chocolate is popular around the world because of its sweet flavor and its structure.

The pronoun 'their' incorrectly refers back to 'chocolate', which is singular; it should be 'its'. Also, 'flavored sweetness' is awkward; 'sweet flavor' is more natural. Consistent use of singular pronouns for singular nouns is necessary.

× My favorite flavor of the chocolate is a Milky bar because it's made-up of milk and delicious in taste.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is Milky Bar because it's made of milk and delicious in taste.

The definite article 'the' before 'chocolate' is unnecessary here. 'Milky Bar' is a proper noun and should be capitalized without 'a'. 'Made-up of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'made of'. The phrase 'delicious in taste' is acceptable but could be simplified to 'delicious'.

× In my country, people are giving the chocolate as a gift to their boyfriend, girlfriend and their relatives kids.

✓ In my country, people give chocolate as a gift to their boyfriends, girlfriends, and their relatives' kids.

The present continuous 'are giving' is less appropriate here; simple present 'give' is better for habitual actions. The definite article 'the' before 'chocolate' is unnecessary. Plural forms 'boyfriends' and 'girlfriends' are needed to match 'people'. The possessive form 'relatives' kids' requires an apostrophe to show possession.

× So I think it's good to use chocolate as a gift because it's sweeter in taste and spread the sweetness among the people.

✓ So I think it's good to use chocolate as a gift because it's sweet in taste and spreads sweetness among people.

The adjective 'sweeter' is comparative and requires a comparison object, which is missing here; 'sweet' is correct. The verb 'spread' should be 'spreads' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The people' is better as 'people' without the definite article for general reference.