Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.

Ví dụ: I like eating chocolate because it is a delicious dessert and provides a quick energy boost when I need it.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid contradictory phrases like 'avoid it on occasionally.' Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

Ví dụ: I seldom eat chocolate because it is too sweet, and since I am health-conscious, I try to avoid it most of the time.

Gợi ý: Clarify your sentences and correct grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details.

Ví dụ: No, I did not eat much chocolate as a kid because it was expensive and not easily available. I only had it on special occasions like birthdays.

Gợi ý: Improve vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like 'as well as the jungle.' Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it is a tasty snack enjoyed by children and adults alike. Many people eat it in the evening or while travelling as a sweet treat.

Gợi ý: Use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Link your ideas clearly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because it is natural, free from artificial flavours, and provides a good energy boost. I also like adding it to other desserts.

Gợi ý: Clarify your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift, especially for children, because it makes them happy and feels welcoming.

× I like to eat chocolate because, uh, it's a good dessert and it's provide the energy when, uh, even I need, uh, to take a quick energy that time, uh, uh, I can eat and I feel more energetic.

✓ I like to eat chocolate because, uh, it's a good dessert and it provides energy when, uh, even I need, uh, to take quick energy at that time, uh, uh, I can eat and I feel more energetic.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular present tense 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (ID 27). Also, 'it's provide' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is', so the verb following should be in the base form with 'does' or conjugated properly. Here, 'it provides' is correct.

× I seldom eat chocolate, not a daily basis because it's too sweet and so I can't eat a chocolate on a regular because I'm a health conscious and I always try to avoid it on occasionally.

✓ I seldom eat chocolate, not on a daily basis because it's too sweet and so I can't eat chocolate regularly because I'm health conscious and I always try to avoid it occasionally.

The phrase 'not a daily basis' should be 'not on a daily basis' to correctly use the preposition 'on' with 'basis'. Also, 'eat a chocolate' is incorrect because 'chocolate' is uncountable here, so the article 'a' should be removed. 'On occasionally' is incorrect; 'occasionally' does not require a preposition. These are preposition usage errors (ID 11).

× No, I'm not a tablet when I was scared. However that time chocolate is not easily available for the kids and it was the expensive item, so I ate only on the special occasion like birthday.

✓ No, I was not a tablet when I was scared. However, at that time chocolate was not easily available for kids and it was an expensive item, so I ate it only on special occasions like birthdays.

The phrase 'I'm not a tablet' is unclear and likely incorrect; possibly intended 'I was not able' or 'I was not a fan'. Also, 'it was the expensive item' should be 'it was an expensive item' because 'item' is singular and indefinite here, requiring the indefinite article 'an'. 'On the special occasion like birthday' should be 'on special occasions like birthdays' for plural and correct article usage. These are pronoun and article errors (IDs 12 and 22).

× According to me, chocolate is become the very famous item in these days among the children and as well as the jungle because it's a good snacks and some of people like to eat in the evening and during the travel as a sweet present.

✓ According to me, chocolate has become a very famous item these days among children as well as adults because it's a good snack and some people like to eat it in the evening and during travel as a sweet treat.

The phrase 'chocolate is become' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has become' is appropriate here to indicate a change over time. 'It's a good snacks' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural; 'snack' should be singular. 'Some of people' should be 'some people'. 'During the travel' should be 'during travel' without 'the'. These are verb tense, quantifier, and preposition errors (IDs 5, 14, 11).

× I often like to eat dark chocolate because it's the good one and there is no artificial flavor and it's a natural 1 and it also gives a good energy to my body and also can add in my other sweets.

✓ I often like to eat dark chocolate because it's a good one and there is no artificial flavor; it's natural and also gives good energy to my body and can be added to my other sweets.

'It's the good one' should be 'it's a good one' because 'good' is an adjective and the article 'a' is appropriate here. 'It's a natural 1' should be 'it's natural' as '1' is incorrect. 'Gives a good energy' should be 'gives good energy' because 'energy' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'Can add in my other sweets' should be 'can be added to my other sweets' for correct verb form and preposition. These are adjective, article, and preposition errors (IDs 13, 22, 11).

× Precisely is the good one. If anyone gives a gift of gives a chocolate as a gift and especially for the kids, they will be happy and feel more welcome.

✓ Precisely, it is a good one. If anyone gives chocolate as a gift, especially to kids, they will be happy and feel more welcomed.

'Precisely is the good one' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'it is' clarifies the sentence. 'Gives a gift of gives a chocolate' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'gives chocolate as a gift'. 'Especially for the kids' should be 'especially to kids' for correct preposition use. 'Feel more welcome' should be 'feel more welcomed' to correctly express the feeling. These are conjunction, preposition, and adjective usage errors (IDs 16, 11, 13).