Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
No I don't. The reason why I don't like eating chocolate is that the flavor I think is so weird and I need to keep my feet and reduce my weight and chocolate is have many calories so I don't like it.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I think maybe once or twice a year. I don't like eating chocolate, so chocolate always was it eat it by my mother.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I often ate chocolate when I were a kid because my grandmother often bought some type of very sweet chocolate for me, and I like it very much because it's too sweet and I like sweet.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
All the reason why people around the world like chocolate is that the chocolate gives people a feeling of happiness and it can helps people forgetting some bad things and.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
Milk. I like milk flavor of chocolate very much, and this is only one flavor that I can eat. I think it's very sweet and I like sweet things.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, especially in volunteers day. The couples are the flowers always give the chocolate as a gift and I think the chocolate is a symbol of love.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意语法时态和单复数形式。可以先直接回答喜欢与否,再给出具体原因,保持句子简洁流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find its flavor strange. Also, I am trying to lose weight, and chocolate has a lot of calories.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题,并用连词连接补充说明,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I eat chocolate once or twice a year because I don't like it. Usually, my mother eats the chocolate instead.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态和语法错误较多,且表达重复。建议注意过去时态的正确使用,避免重复表达,句子结构应更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because my grandmother bought me very sweet chocolate. I liked it because I enjoy sweet tastes.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误,建议使用完整句子,注意主谓一致和动词形式,补充具体原因使内容更丰富。
Ví dụ: People around the world like chocolate because it makes them feel happy. It can also help people forget their worries for a while.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但表达略显重复。建议使用连词连接句子,使表达更自然流畅,同时丰富词汇。
Ví dụ: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate. It's very sweet, and I like sweet things, so it's the only flavour I can eat.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议理清句子结构,使用正确的词汇表达节日和送礼的习俗,避免词语搭配错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift, especially on Valentine's Day. Couples often give flowers and chocolate to each other because chocolate symbolizes love.
× chocolate is have many calories so I don't like it.
✓ chocolate has many calories so I don't like it.
这里主语是不可数名词'chocolate',谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'have'的正确形式是'has'。
× chocolate always was it eat it by my mother.
✓ chocolate was always eaten by my mother.
句子描述过去的习惯动作,动词应使用过去时态的被动语态,'was it eat it'结构错误,应改为'was always eaten'。
× I often ate chocolate when I were a kid
✓ I often ate chocolate when I was a kid
主语是第一人称单数'I',过去时态中be动词应使用'was'而非'were'。
× and it can helps people forgetting some bad things and.
✓ and it can help people forget some bad things.
'can'后应接动词原形,'helps'应改为'help';'forgetting'应改为'forget';句尾多余的'and'应去掉。
× Milk. I like milk flavor of chocolate very much, and this is only one flavor that I can eat.
✓ Milk. I like the milk flavor of chocolate very much, and this is the only flavor that I can eat.
'milk flavor'前应加定冠词'the'表示特指;'only one flavor'前应加定冠词'the'。
× especially in volunteers day.
✓ especially on Volunteers Day.
表示具体日期时应使用介词'on',且'Volunteers Day'应大写。
× The couples are the flowers always give the chocolate as a gift
✓ Couples and flowers always give chocolate as gifts
'couples'和'flowers'均为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式'give';'the chocolate'改为复数形式'chocolate'或' chocolates','as a gift'改为复数形式'as gifts'。