Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I really love eating chocolate. I'm the biggest fan of chocolate. When I was a little kid, chocolate as a gift and a reward. It's it's, it's really pleasant for me.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
When I was a little kid, I often eat chocolate once or twice a week. Uh, because it's too sweet and it's harmful to my it's harm to my teeth. Uh, eating too much will make me too sick.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
When I was a little kid, I used to eat chocolate once or twice a week because I really enjoyed the sweet taste. However, I stopped eating it frequently because it can harm my teeth and sometimes make me feel sick if I ate too much.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
Well, the main reason for chocolate is popular around the world. Maybe as a gift it's a good choice you can send them for at any age and ending people it's.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
As to me, I prefer dark chocolate because white chocolate is too sweet for me. I can't stand it. If the chocolate mixed with some fruits or nuts, I will also like to try them.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I think chocolate is popular around the world mainly because it's a versatile gift that suits people of all age. Eat sweet taste makes it enjoyable for almost everyone.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,建议注意句子结构完整性,避免重复词汇,并且用更自然的表达方式描述原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and brings back happy childhood memories when I used to receive it as a gift or reward.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答时态混乱,且表达不流畅,建议使用正确的时态,避免重复和语法错误,并且用连贯的句子表达原因。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to eat chocolate once or twice a week, but I limited it because it is too sweet and can harm my teeth if I eat too much.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,同时丰富细节。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I often ate chocolate once or twice a week because I loved its sweet taste. However, I reduced my consumption later since it could damage my teeth and sometimes made me feel unwell if I ate too much.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议明确表达观点,使用连贯的句子,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide mainly because it is a versatile gift suitable for people of all ages, and its sweet taste is enjoyed by many.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以使用更多丰富的词汇和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer dark chocolate because I find white chocolate too sweet to enjoy. Additionally, I like chocolates that are mixed with fruits or nuts, as they add interesting textures and flavors.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题,建议注意句子结构和用词准确性,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Definitely. Chocolate makes a great gift because it is versatile and suitable for people of all ages. Its sweet taste makes it enjoyable for almost everyone.
× When I was a little kid, chocolate as a gift and a reward.
✓ When I was a little kid, chocolate was a gift and a reward.
句子缺少谓语动词,导致结构不完整。应添加动词“was”使句子完整。
× When I was a little kid, I often eat chocolate once or twice a week.
✓ When I was a little kid, I often ate chocolate once or twice a week.
描述过去习惯时应使用过去时态,动词“eat”应改为过去式“ate”。
× because it's too sweet and it's harmful to my it's harm to my teeth.
✓ because it's too sweet and it's harmful to my teeth.
句中“it's harm to my teeth”结构错误,重复且不符合语法,应删除多余部分。
× Well, the main reason for chocolate is popular around the world.
✓ Well, the main reason chocolate is popular around the world is...
句子结构混乱,主语和谓语位置不当,应调整语序使句子通顺。
× Maybe as a gift it's a good choice you can send them for at any age and ending people it's.
✓ Maybe as a gift, it's a good choice you can send to people of any age.
句子结构混乱,表达不清,需简化并调整语序,使意思明确。
× Eat sweet taste makes it enjoyable for almost everyone.
✓ Its sweet taste makes it enjoyable for almost everyone.
“Eat sweet taste”表达错误,应使用“its sweet taste”表示“它的甜味”。