Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear reason why you like chocolate and avoid irrelevant or confusing details. Use simple, correct sentences and limit your answer to 3-4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and makes me happy. When I was a kid, I used to eat chocolate often with my family and friends. Even now, I enjoy it as a treat when I go outside.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar. Give a clear frequency and explain briefly when you eat chocolate.

Ví dụ: I eat chocolate quite often, especially when I go out with my friends or family. Sometimes my parents give me chocolate as a gift, and I also ask them to buy it for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating previous answers and try to explain clearly why you ate chocolate as a kid. Use simple sentences and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I liked its sweet taste. However, I know eating too much chocolate is not good for health.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to explain reasons clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid informal phrases like 'So yeah'.

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide for several reasons. Firstly, it tastes delicious and satisfies people's sweet cravings. Secondly, there are many varieties like dark chocolate and KitKat, which attract different tastes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your favourite flavour and give a reason. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I usually eat different kinds of chocolate, but my favourite is dark chocolate. It is popular worldwide and has a rich, strong flavour that I enjoy.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Try to organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift because people of all ages like it. For example, during birthdays or special events, giving chocolate is a thoughtful and popular choice.

× I like often eating chocolate because a lot of trees.

✓ I often like eating chocolate because of a lot of trees.

The phrase 'like often eating' is incorrect because 'often' should modify the verb phrase properly. Also, 'because a lot of trees' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'because of a lot of trees' to indicate reason. The suggestion is to place 'often' before 'like' and use 'because of' to show cause.

× Also whenever you when I was a kid at that time I used to eating chocolate and I know it's not actually a positive side for a kid, but I often eating chocolate whenever I go outside with my friends or families, they also give me.

✓ Also, whenever I was a kid, I used to eat chocolate and I know it's not actually positive for a kid, but I often eat chocolate whenever I go outside with my friends or family; they also give me some.

The phrase 'used to eating' is incorrect; it should be 'used to eat' because 'used to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Similarly, 'I often eating' should be 'I often eat' to maintain correct verb form. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring collectively. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× It's a quite often I eat chocolate like, uh, whenever I go outside with my friend, relatives, or especially my parents, they give me, uh, chocolate as a gift.

✓ I quite often eat chocolate, like whenever I go outside with my friends, relatives, or especially my parents; they give me chocolate as a gift.

The phrase 'It's a quite often' is incorrect; 'quite often' is an adverbial phrase and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for natural flow.

× Or sometimes I, uh, demand with him, demand for me, with my parents that you have to give me.

✓ Sometimes I ask my parents to give me chocolate.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and phrasing. 'Demand with him' and 'demand for me' are incorrect. The correct expression is 'ask my parents' or 'request from my parents'. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity.

× I've already mentioned earlier that when I was a kid, at that time, I used to eat chocolate because, uh, uh, chocolate are really, uh, essential and as well as, uh, it's not too much good for heat, But when I was kid, I eat too much chocolate.

✓ I've already mentioned earlier that when I was a kid, I used to eat chocolate because chocolate is really essential, although it's not very good for health. But when I was a kid, I ate too much chocolate.

'Chocolate are' is incorrect; 'chocolate' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is'. 'Not too much good for heat' should be 'not very good for health'. Also, 'when I was kid' needs the article 'a' as 'when I was a kid'. 'Eat' should be past tense 'ate' to match the time frame.

× There are number of reasons why chocolate is more popular around the world.

✓ There are a number of reasons why chocolate is popular around the world.

The phrase 'There are number of reasons' is missing the article 'a' before 'number'. Also, 'more popular' is comparative and needs a comparison object; 'popular' alone is sufficient here.

× First of all, I think it is really mouthwatering when anyone eat any kind of chocolate like KitKat or Dark.

✓ First of all, I think it is really mouthwatering when anyone eats any kind of chocolate like KitKat or dark chocolate.

'Anyone eat' should be 'anyone eats' to agree with third person singular subject 'anyone'. Also, 'Dark' should be 'dark chocolate' for clarity.

× When they eat and they bite that time though, they feel like a blast on their mouth.

✓ When they eat and bite, they feel like a blast in their mouth.

'On their mouth' is incorrect preposition; it should be 'in their mouth'. Also, 'that time though' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× I normally eat several kind of chocolate pie, but my my favorite is the dark, which is really renowned in all over the world, as well as I eat kit card.

✓ I normally eat several kinds of chocolate, but my favorite is dark chocolate, which is really renowned all over the world. I also eat Kit Kat.

'Several kind' should be 'several kinds' to agree in number. 'Chocolate pie' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'chocolate' is sufficient. 'The dark' should be 'dark chocolate'. 'Kit card' is a misspelling of 'Kit Kat'.

× But my my favorite and the most popular in dark chocolate, which is which flavor is outstanding.

✓ But my favorite and the most popular is dark chocolate, which has an outstanding flavor.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper adjective use and clarity.

× Yes, I strongly believe that as a gift chocolate is outstanding because all kinds of age people, they love eating chocolate and I think it's better for other like whenever you go any kind of event like birthday, that time you can give to chocolate.

✓ Yes, I strongly believe that chocolate is an outstanding gift because people of all ages love eating it. I think it's good to give chocolate at events like birthdays.

'All kinds of age people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'people of all ages'. 'Better for other' is unclear and corrected to 'good to give'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.