Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and correcting grammar mistakes. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and concisely. For example, say you avoid eating chocolate because it can cause tooth problems and weight gain.

Ví dụ: I don't eat chocolate often because I want to avoid gaining weight and damaging my teeth. That's why I try to limit my chocolate consumption.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant words. Focus on answering directly and clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and specify occasions when you eat chocolate.

Ví dụ: I eat chocolate occasionally, usually on special occasions like birthdays or after meals.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Explain your past habit and current change clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat chocolate often as a child because it was my favourite food. However, now I avoid eating too much chocolate due to health reasons.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by using correct vocabulary and linking words. Explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition. For example, mention taste and occasions when people eat chocolate.

Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because of its unique taste and sweetness. People often enjoy it after meals or during special occasions like birthdays.

Gợi ý: Clarify your favourite flavour and avoid filler words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Explain when you like to eat chocolate.

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate. I usually eat it when I crave something sweet.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Express your opinion clearly and provide reasons. For example, explain why you prefer giving practical gifts over chocolate.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, chocolate can be a good gift, but I prefer giving practical items that people need. This way, the gift is more useful to them.

× I don't eat chocolate enough because I want to, uh, excessive eat chocolate and pretty fat from my teeth.

✓ I don't eat chocolate enough because I want to avoid excessive eating of chocolate as it causes cavities in my teeth.

The phrase 'excessive eat chocolate' is incorrect because after 'want to', the verb should be in its base form or followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing an action. Here, 'excessive eating' is the correct form to express the action of eating too much chocolate.

× That's why I avoid to eat chocolate.

✓ That's why I avoid eating chocolate.

The verb 'avoid' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) and not by 'to' plus the verb. Therefore, 'avoid eating' is correct, while 'avoid to eat' is incorrect.

× One FC deputy novel totally depend on my mind, but sometimes I eat chocolate one special occasion like birthday and sometimes I eat chocolate after my meal.

✓ My chocolate eating totally depends on my mood, but sometimes I eat chocolate on special occasions like birthdays, and sometimes I eat chocolate after my meal.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect structure. 'One FC deputy novel totally depend on my mind' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects subject-verb agreement and preposition use.

× sometimes I eat chocolate one special occasion like birthday

✓ sometimes I eat chocolate on special occasions like birthdays

The preposition 'on' is used with days and special occasions. 'One special occasion' should be 'on special occasions' to be grammatically correct.

× Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

✓ Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?

This sentence is correct as it uses the past tense appropriately with 'did' and 'were'.

× I definitely used chocolate because the chocolate is, uh, because that time chocolate is my favorite food according to some cause, uh, causes on my, this problem that that's why I follow, uh, avoid.

✓ I definitely used to eat chocolate because at that time chocolate was my favorite food, but due to some causes related to my health, I avoid it now.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verb forms. 'Used chocolate' should be 'used to eat chocolate' to express past habitual action. Also, 'the chocolate is' should be 'chocolate was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× That's why now I avoid to eat excessive.

✓ That's why now I avoid eating excessively.

Again, 'avoid' should be followed by a gerund, so 'avoid eating' is correct. Also, 'excessive' is an adjective; the adverb 'excessively' is needed here to modify the verb.

× According to my prospectus, chocolate is very popular around the world because of their unique tears and taste.

✓ According to my perspective, chocolate is very popular around the world because of its unique texture and taste.

'Prospectus' is incorrect here; 'perspective' is the intended word. Also, 'their' is a plural pronoun, but 'chocolate' is singular, so 'its' is correct. 'Tears' is a wrong word; 'texture' fits the context.

× Everyone liked to eat chocolate after meal and on their special day like birthday and birthday parties and uh it also uh uh, and some dry forts also.

✓ Everyone likes to eat chocolate after meals and on special days like birthdays and birthday parties, and also with some dry fruits.

'Liked' should be 'likes' to match present tense general truth. 'Their special day' is better as 'special days' for generalization. 'Dry forts' is a misspelling of 'dry fruits'.

× My favorite chocolate and deli milk.

✓ My favorite chocolate is Dairy Milk.

The sentence lacks a verb and proper noun capitalization. 'Deli milk' is likely a misspelling of 'Dairy Milk', a chocolate brand.

× I love, umm, I love these uh, both of the software too much and I always try to eat chocolate when I I'm craving for a sleep thing, then I eat chocolate.

✓ I love both of these chocolates very much, and I always try to eat chocolate when I'm craving something sweet.

The original sentence has unclear phrases like 'both of the software' and 'craving for a sleep thing'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× On my personal experience, I always try to gifts to others because going to going to rather than chocolate because 20 two days I can give those things which are needed for them.

✓ In my personal experience, I always try to give gifts to others rather than chocolate because I can give them things they need.

'On my personal experience' should be 'In my personal experience'. 'Try to gifts' is incorrect; it should be 'try to give gifts'. The phrase 'going to going to' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× That's why I prefer two groups as compared to chocolates as a gift.

✓ That's why I prefer to give gifts other than chocolates.

'Two groups' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence is corrected to express preference clearly. 'As compared to' is replaced with 'other than' for natural expression.