Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and helps me relax.' This is more natural and clear.

Ví dụ: I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and helps me relax after a long day.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I often eat chocolate every weekend with my friends because it helps us relax after a busy week.'

Ví dụ: I often eat chocolate every weekend with my friends because it helps us relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, 'Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child because I liked it. My parents gave me a box of chocolates on my second birthday, which made me love it even more.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child because I liked it. My parents gave me a box of chocolates on my second birthday, which made me love it even more.

Gợi ý: Avoid unclear phrases and focus on clear reasons. For example, 'Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and contains sugar, which many people enjoy.'

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and contains sugar, which many people enjoy.

Gợi ý: Try to make sentences concise and use correct grammar. For example, 'My favourite flavour is dark chocolate from America. My brother lives there and he gave me a box of American dark chocolate as a birthday present last year.'

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate from America. My brother lives there and he gave me a box of American dark chocolate as a birthday present last year.

Gợi ý: Use clearer sentences and avoid repetition. For example, 'Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because almost everyone likes its delicious taste. I often give chocolate as presents to others.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because almost everyone likes its delicious taste. I often give chocolate as presents to others.

× I like chocolate because it have a delicious taste.

✓ I like chocolate because it has a delicious taste.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.

× I often do eat chocolate on every weekend with my friends for satisfying our meal and relaxation for my room.

✓ I often eat chocolate every weekend with my friends to satisfy our meal and relax in my room.

The preposition 'on' is not used with 'every weekend'; also, 'for satisfying' and 'relaxation for my room' are incorrect phrases. Use 'to satisfy' and 'relax in my room' instead.

× A lot of work day.

✓ I have a lot of work during the day.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'I have' and 'during the day' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Yes, I eat chocolate from my childhood because of I like chocolate and my parents provide me a box of chocolate on my 2nd birthday.

✓ Yes, I ate chocolate since my childhood because I liked chocolate and my parents provided me a box of chocolate on my 2nd birthday.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs 'ate', 'liked', and 'provided' should be used instead of present tense.

× From my second birthday I like to eat chocolate.

✓ Since my second birthday, I have liked eating chocolate.

The phrase 'From my second birthday' should be 'Since my second birthday' to indicate a starting point in the past continuing to present; also, 'have liked eating' is appropriate present perfect tense.

× Yes, chocolate popular all over the world because of a delicious taste and chocolate is a type of male type of male.

✓ Yes, chocolate is popular all over the world because of its delicious taste, and chocolate is a type of candy.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'chocolate'; 'because of a delicious taste' should be 'because of its delicious taste'; 'male type of male' is incorrect and replaced with 'a type of candy' for clarity.

× It contains sugar and also many items in it and it is a very best chocolate.

✓ It contains sugar and many other ingredients, and it is a very good chocolate.

'Items in it' is vague; 'ingredients' is more appropriate. 'Very best' is incorrect; use 'very good' or 'the best'.

× My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate from American.

✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate from America.

'From American' is incorrect; the correct preposition and noun form is 'from America'.

× I like to eat chocolate of American companies because my brother live in America and he preferred to eat American chocolate and last year he gave me a box on my birthday as a present of dark chocolate.

✓ I like to eat chocolate from American companies because my brother lives in America and he prefers to eat American chocolate. Last year, he gave me a box of dark chocolate as a birthday present.

'Chocolate of American companies' should be 'chocolate from American companies'; 'brother live' should be 'brother lives' (third person singular); 'he preferred' should be 'he prefers' to indicate habitual action; 'gave me a box on my birthday as a present of dark chocolate' is rephrased for clarity.

× Yes, I think it is good to gift or present a chocolate to other because chocolate is like by everyone in the world.

✓ Yes, I think it is good to gift or present chocolate to others because chocolate is liked by everyone in the world.

'Chocolate is like by everyone' is incorrect passive form; it should be 'chocolate is liked by everyone'. Also, 'a chocolate' is incorrect; 'chocolate' is uncountable here, and 'other' should be 'others'.

× I think no one like no one dislike chocolate because of a delicious taste and I mainly present this chocolate to other.

✓ I think no one likes or dislikes chocolate because of its delicious taste, and I mainly present this chocolate to others.

'No one like' should be 'no one likes' (third person singular); 'no one dislike' should be 'no one dislikes'; 'a delicious taste' should be 'its delicious taste'; 'to other' should be 'to others'.