Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'd like to eat chocolate and other sweet food like cakes and so on. Uh, because, uh, when I was sick, I often to eat some chocolate, it will make me happy and the texture is too smooth, so I'm really keen on it.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I think it may be once a week, although I better like to eat chocolate but I have two steak so I can't eat it often but sometimes I will eat something sweet to improve my mood.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yeah, when I was a kid, chocolate was my favorite sweet food. My older brother always took me to buy it, but my mom limited the quantity of chocolate so I have no more than chance to eat it.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
Well firstly I suppose chocolate is tasty and have many kids for just like mixed mixed with milk, fruit and nerves and so on. Secondly, it will add a gift to some other because it symbolize a lot of Yeah.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer white chocolate because I can't stand too bitter, so I always eat it like strawberry white chocolate. I think it is very delicious. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Uh, yeah, I think it's a very good gift. Uh, maybe because I am fond, I am fond of it when I don't know what gift to give, give to others. Uh, I chose chocolate because, uh, statistics and symbolize loves. It is very useful.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误,表达更自然流畅。可以简洁地说明喜欢巧克力的原因,并用具体细节支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it cheers me up when I'm feeling unwell. Its smooth texture and sweet taste always make me feel better.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰,避免语法错误和不连贯。可以直接说明频率,并解释原因,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate about once a week because I have to watch my diet, but sometimes I enjoy sweets to lift my mood.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答应更准确表达意思,避免语法错误。可以用连接词丰富内容,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, chocolate was my favorite sweet when I was a child. My older brother often bought it for me, but my mother limited how much I could eat.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰且有语法错误,应更准确表达观点,使用恰当词汇和连接词,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and comes in many varieties, like milk, fruit, and nut flavors. Also, it is often given as a gift because it symbolizes affection.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免口语填充词,表达更流畅自然。可以用连接词丰富句子结构。
Ví dụ: My favorite flavor is white chocolate because I don't like bitter tastes. I especially enjoy strawberry white chocolate because it's very delicious.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免重复和语法错误,表达更清晰。可以说明为什么巧克力是好礼物,并用具体理由支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because it's popular and symbolizes love. When I'm unsure what to give, I often choose chocolate.
× I often to eat some chocolate
✓ I often eat some chocolate
动词后不需要加不定式to,'often'后直接接动词原形。这里错误地使用了'to eat',应改为'eat'。
× other sweet food like cakes and so on
✓ other sweet foods like cakes and so on
'food'作为可数名词时应使用复数形式'foods',表示多种甜食。
× I better like to eat chocolate
✓ I prefer to eat chocolate
'better like'用法错误,正确表达偏好应使用'verb + to do'结构,如'prefer to eat'。
× I have two steak
✓ I have two steaks
'steak'为可数名词,复数形式应为'steaks'。
× I have no more than chance to eat it
✓ I have no more than one chance to eat it
缺少数量词,'no more than'后应接具体数量,如'one chance'。
× chocolate is tasty and have many kids for just like mixed mixed with milk, fruit and nerves and so on
✓ chocolate is tasty and has many kinds, for example, mixed with milk, fruit and nuts and so on
主语'chocolate'为单数,谓语动词应为'has','kids'应为'kinds','nerves'应为'nuts'。
× it will add a gift to some other because it symbolize a lot of Yeah
✓ it can be given as a gift to others because it symbolizes a lot
'some other'用法错误,应为'others',动词'symbolize'应加第三人称单数形式'symbolizes'。
× I can't stand too bitter
✓ I can't stand it being too bitter
'too bitter'前应加形式主语'it being',使句子完整。
× I always eat it like strawberry white chocolate
✓ I always eat it, like strawberry white chocolate
缺少逗号,分隔句子,使表达更清晰。
× I am fond, I am fond of it when I don't know what gift to give, give to others
✓ I am fond of it, so when I don't know what gift to give to others
重复使用'I am fond',应合并表达,'give to others'前加'gift'。
× statistics and symbolize loves
✓ it symbolizes love
'statistics'用法错误,应为'it symbolizes love',表达巧克力象征爱。