Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Is I do because I like. Eating sweet food and I like the taste of chocolate.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I often eat chocolate once a week because I want to protect my T's house. While enjoying the sweet foods.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes I did because I liked the creamy and rich taste. Of chocolate.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
Chocolate is popular around the world because of its rich taste. Besides. The appearance of chocolate is also attractive.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk flavor because I find it the most creamy and. It tastes very good.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is good to use chocolate as gifts because they carries a. Meaning of love and sweetness.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子不完整,表达不自然。建议练习完整句子结构,避免断句,提升表达流畅度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do like eating chocolate because I enjoy sweet foods and the rich taste of chocolate.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的内容("protect my T's house"),影响理解。建议回答时紧扣问题,避免无关信息,并使用连贯句子。
Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate once a week because I want to enjoy sweet treats in moderation.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且断句不当,建议使用完整句子并适当扩展细节,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because I loved its creamy texture and rich flavor.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子断裂,连接词使用不当。建议使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because of its rich taste and attractive appearance.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中断句不完整,表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子并避免重复,提升表达清晰度。
Ví dụ: My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is creamy and tastes delicious.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误(如"carries a"),句子不完整。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性,表达更准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift because it symbolizes love and sweetness.
× Is I do because I like.
✓ I do because I like it.
句子主语是“I”,谓语动词应与主语一致,不能用“Is”,应使用“I do”。此外,句子缺少宾语“it”,使句意完整。
× Eating sweet food and I like the taste of chocolate.
✓ I like eating sweet food and the taste of chocolate.
原句结构不完整,缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不通顺。应调整为完整句子,主语为“I”,谓语为“like”,宾语为“eating sweet food and the taste of chocolate”。
× I often eat chocolate once a week because I want to protect my T's house. While enjoying the sweet foods.
✓ I often eat chocolate once a week because I want to protect my teeth while enjoying sweet foods.
原句中“While enjoying the sweet foods.”为不完整句,应与前句合并。且“T's house”应为“teeth”,表示“牙齿”。“sweet foods”前不需要冠词“the”。
× Yes I did because I liked the creamy and rich taste. Of chocolate.
✓ Yes, I did because I liked the creamy and rich taste of chocolate.
“Of chocolate.”为不完整句,应与前句合并。句中应加逗号分隔“Yes”和“I did”,使句子更自然。
× Besides. The appearance of chocolate is also attractive.
✓ Besides, the appearance of chocolate is also attractive.
“Besides.”不应单独成句,应与后句合并,且用逗号连接。
× My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk flavor because I find it the most creamy and. It tastes very good.
✓ My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk flavor because I find it the creamiest and it tastes very good.
“the most creamy”应使用最高级形式“the creamiest”。“and.”后不应断句,应与后句合并。
× Yes, I think it is good to use chocolate as gifts because they carries a. Meaning of love and sweetness.
✓ Yes, I think it is good to use chocolate as gifts because they carry a meaning of love and sweetness.
主语“they”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“carry”,而非“carries”。“a.”后不应断句,应与后句合并。