Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Oh, I don't like chocolate 'cause this test I think is so bad I don't like. The test. I like sugar. Or some. Tested good things.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I don't like chocolate so I have less time to eat chocolate but. Effect can a can view some tired right I will eat a chocolate make me. Exercise to work or to drive?
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, wait, why was OK, it's. I also don't like chocolate. I like some this Ruger snake because. M. So 5 facts.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
I think a chocolate so popular becauses. It can make make people make my body too energetic. Oh I see, it's good for when we are tired to work or to drive.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
I don't know because I don't like chocolate, so I don't know how can of chocolate. Fillers of chocolate. About. I like it. Some spices, Nick. Snacks.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sing it. It's good to use chocolate for as gifts to others because the chocolate is so popular in the world, so I think. If the gift to others too. The others will be happy and so excited because he have a chocolate.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达含糊不清,缺乏针对问题的直接回答。建议练习用简洁明了的句子直接表达观点,并给出具体理由。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like eating chocolate because I find it too sweet for my taste. Instead, I prefer other sugary snacks like candies or cakes.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法错误较多,缺乏逻辑性。建议练习用简单句表达频率,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I rarely eat chocolate because I don't like it. Sometimes, when I feel tired, I might eat a little to feel more energetic.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且不连贯,未能清楚表达过去的习惯。建议用完整句子描述过去的情况,并给出具体细节。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often eat chocolate when I was a kid because I preferred other snacks like gummy candies.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语言重复且不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it provides a quick energy boost and tastes delicious, which helps people feel refreshed when they are tired.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰,未能直接回答问题。建议直接说明没有喜欢的口味,并简要解释原因。
Ví dụ: I don't have a favourite chocolate flavour because I don't like chocolate. I prefer other types of snacks instead.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语法和句子结构有待改进。建议练习使用正确的句型表达观点,并提供具体理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it is popular and most people enjoy receiving it, which makes them happy and excited.
× Oh, I don't like chocolate 'cause this test I think is so bad I don't like.
✓ Oh, I don't like chocolate because I think this test is so bad.
句子结构混乱,导致表达不清晰。应调整语序,使句子符合英语表达习惯。
× The test.
✓ The test.
单独的短语无法构成完整句子,应与前句合并或补充谓语。
× I like sugar. Or some. Tested good things.
✓ I like sugar or some other sweet things.
量词使用不当,且句子不完整,应使用合适的量词和连接词使句子完整。
× I don't like chocolate so I have less time to eat chocolate but.
✓ I don't like chocolate, so I rarely eat it.
句子结构不完整,且表达不清晰,应简化并调整语序。
× Effect can a can view some tired right I will eat a chocolate make me.
✓ When I feel tired, I will eat chocolate to make me feel better.
句子结构混乱,词序错误,导致意思不明,应调整为正确的句子结构。
× Exercise to work or to drive?
✓ It helps me when I work or drive.
句子不完整且结构错误,应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。
× No, wait, why was OK, it's.
✓ No, I didn't. It's okay.
句子结构混乱,表达不清晰,应简化并调整语序。
× I like some this Ruger snake because.
✓ I like some sugar snacks because of their taste.
量词和词汇使用错误,应使用正确的词汇和量词。
× M. So 5 facts.
✓ I have five facts about it.
句子不完整且无意义,应补充完整表达。
× I think a chocolate so popular becauses.
✓ I think chocolate is so popular because
连词使用错误,且冠词使用不当,应去掉冠词并正确使用because。
× It can make make people make my body too energetic.
✓ It can make people feel energetic.
句子重复且结构错误,应简化表达。
× Oh I see, it's good for when we are tired to work or to drive.
✓ Oh, I see. It's good for when we are tired at work or driving.
句子结构不完整,介词使用不当,应调整语序和介词。
× I don't know because I don't like chocolate, so I don't know how can of chocolate.
✓ I don't know because I don't like chocolate, so I don't know what kinds of chocolate there are.
句子结构错误,表达不清晰,应调整语序并补充完整。
× Fillers of chocolate.
✓ Flavors of chocolate.
单词拼写错误,应使用正确的词汇。
× About. I like it. Some spices, Nick. Snacks.
✓ I like some spicy snacks.
句子断裂且无意义,应合并并简化表达。
× Yes, I sing it.
✓ Yes, I think so.
动词使用错误,应使用正确的情态动词表达观点。
× It's good to use chocolate for as gifts to others because the chocolate is so popular in the world, so I think.
✓ It's good to use chocolate as gifts for others because chocolate is so popular worldwide.
介词使用错误,应调整介词顺序使表达正确。
× If the gift to others too.
✓ If we give it to others too,
句子不完整,应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。
× The others will be happy and so excited because he have a chocolate.
✓ Others will be happy and excited because they have chocolate.
代词使用错误,主谓不一致,应使用正确的代词和动词形式。