Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like eating chocolate because I think eating chocolate can make our feel relaxing and the. I like I like pizza. Phones. I think it sounds delicious.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I also eat chocolate when I feel stressed. I often eat her chocolate after.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often eat chocolate when I wore a kid. In my childhood. Keep also like sweet things so. Also. Also so me I like it too.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
I think it's popular. Do too is delicious song delicious test. And it can makes people feel relaxed after a. After job. After a stressful job.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
My favorite is delicious. Say. Is pressure system make me relax and I think it's her. Also taste very good.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Brinker is good to use chocolate others. Jumping is awful too. Express Hour. Who?
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和无关内容。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和无关信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it helps me feel relaxed and tastes delicious.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且含糊,缺少具体频率和连贯表达。建议明确说明频率并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I often eat chocolate when I feel stressed, usually a few times a week.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,清楚描述过去的习惯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I liked sweet things.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达不流畅,语法和词汇使用错误。建议用连贯句子说明原因,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and helps people relax after a stressful day.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不明确且语法错误严重。建议直接说明喜欢的口味并解释原因。
Ví dụ: My favorite flavor of chocolate is dark chocolate because it helps me relax and tastes great.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,无法理解。建议用完整句子表达观点并给出理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it can express care and is enjoyed by many people.
× I think eating chocolate can make our feel relaxing and the.
✓ I think eating chocolate can make us feel relaxed.
这里的 'our' 用法错误,应该用宾格代词 'us'。此外,'relaxing' 应改为形容词 'relaxed' 来描述人的感受。
× I like I like pizza. Phones.
✓ I like pizza and chocolate.
句子结构混乱,'Phones' 无意义,应删除并重组句子使其通顺。
× I often eat her chocolate after.
✓ I often eat chocolate afterwards.
'her' 用法错误,应该直接说 'chocolate',并用副词 'afterwards' 表示时间顺序。
× Yes, I often eat chocolate when I wore a kid.
✓ Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid.
描述过去习惯时,动词应使用过去式 'ate','wore' 是 'wear' 的过去式,错误,应改为 'was'。
× Also so me I like it too.
✓ So do I, I like it too.
表达同意时应使用 'So do I',原句语序和用词错误。
× I think it's popular. Do too is delicious song delicious test.
✓ I think it's popular because it tastes delicious.
句子中 'Do too is delicious song delicious test' 无意义,应改为表达原因的完整句子。
× And it can makes people feel relaxed after a.
✓ And it can make people feel relaxed after a stressful day.
'can' 后动词应为原形,'makes' 应改为 'make'。
× My favorite is delicious. Say. Is pressure system make me relax and I think it's her. Also taste very good.
✓ My favorite is chocolate with a delicious taste. It helps me relax, and I think it tastes very good.
原句断句不当,语义不清,需重组句子使其通顺。
× Brinker is good to use chocolate others.
✓ I think it is good to give chocolate to others as gifts.
'Brinker' 可能是拼写错误,应为 'I think',并且缺少介词 'to',句子不完整。
× Jumping is awful too. Express Hour. Who?
✓ Giving chocolate is also a good way to express your feelings.
原句无意义,需根据上下文重写句子表达正确意思。