Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
But yes I like eating chocolate becauses it's very yummy and he gives me more energy.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I eat chocolate very often because it gives me energy and I really like it.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
I used to eat chocolate a lot when I was a kid because I loved it so much.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
I think chocolate is very popular in the world because it is very tasty and gives a lot of energy.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
My favorite taste of chocolate is milk. It's very sweet.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
I think that giving a birthday present in the form of chocolate is very good because chocolate gives energy and it is also good for the mind.
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Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не совсем естественен. Следует избегать лишних слов и использовать правильные местоимения. Также стоит расширить ответ, чтобы он был более информативным.
Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and gives me a quick boost of energy.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Ответ достаточно понятен, но повторение причины "it gives me energy" снижает естественность. Рекомендуется использовать разнообразие лексики и связующие слова для плавности.
Ví dụ: I eat chocolate quite often since it helps me feel energized, and I really enjoy its taste.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующее слово для улучшения связности и немного расширить ответ, чтобы он был более содержательным.
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat chocolate a lot when I was a kid because I loved its sweet taste and it made me happy.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Ответ простой и повторяет ранее использованные идеи. Рекомендуется использовать более разнообразную лексику и добавить дополнительные причины с примерами.
Ví dụ: I believe chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes delicious and provides a quick energy boost, making it a favorite treat for many people.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Ответ понятен, но можно использовать более точные выражения и добавить объяснение, почему именно этот вкус нравится.
Ví dụ: My favorite flavor of chocolate is milk chocolate because it has a smooth texture and a sweet, creamy taste.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит повторения и не совсем точные утверждения. Следует избегать излишних обобщений и добавить более конкретные причины, почему шоколад подходит в качестве подарка.
Ví dụ: I think giving chocolate as a birthday gift is a great idea because many people enjoy it, and it can make the occasion feel special.
Ngữ pháp
× But yes I like eating chocolate becauses it's very yummy and he gives me more energy.
✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate because it's very yummy and it gives me more energy.
The sentence incorrectly starts with 'But yes' which is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used to refer to chocolate; it should be 'it' since chocolate is an inanimate object. The corrected sentence removes 'But', fixes the spelling, and replaces 'he' with 'it' for clarity and correctness.
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