Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to be more concise and clear, for example, say "I love dark chocolate with at least 70% cocoa because it has less sugar and can improve mood and health." Avoid redundancy and unclear expressions like "some such thing in that one helps."

Ví dụ: I really enjoy eating dark chocolate with at least 70% cocoa because it contains less sugar and can boost my mood and health, especially during PMS.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I usually eat chocolate when I feel down because it helps brighten my mood, especially after a bad day at school or work."

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate when I feel a bit down because it helps lift my spirits, especially after a tough day at school or work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with supporting details. For example, "No, I didn't eat much chocolate as a kid because my family limited it due to the high sugar content. But now that I have my own money, I can buy chocolate whenever I want."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't eat much chocolate as a child because my family limited it due to its high sugar content. However, now that I earn money, I can buy chocolate whenever I like.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to organise your points clearly and avoid repetition. For example, "Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is delicious and affordable. Also, marketing makes us associate chocolate with happiness."

Ví dụ: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes great and is affordable. Additionally, marketing often links chocolate with happiness, which encourages people to buy it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has unclear and awkward phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "My favourite chocolate flavour is dark chocolate with 70% or more cocoa content. Although it is a bit bitter, I enjoy its rich taste."

Ví dụ: My favourite chocolate is dark chocolate with 70% or higher cocoa content. It tastes a bit bitter, but I really enjoy its rich flavour.

Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, "I think chocolate can be a good gift, but we should consider the recipient's preferences and health. For instance, giving chocolate to someone with diabetes might not be appropriate, but children usually love it."

Ví dụ: Chocolate can be a good gift, but it's important to consider the person's preferences and health. For example, it might not be suitable for someone with diabetes, but children often enjoy receiving chocolate.

× I heard in some research that the dark chocolate with less sugar can have we improve our mood as well as have us live healthier.

✓ I heard in some research that dark chocolate with less sugar can help us improve our mood as well as help us live healthier.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'have we improve' and 'have us live', which is not grammatically correct. The verb 'have' should be replaced with 'help' followed by the base verb to express assistance or causation. This correction clarifies the meaning and uses the correct verb form.

× I usually eat chocolate when. I'm I have a down mood.

✓ I usually eat chocolate when I have a down mood.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and an unnecessary pronoun 'I'm' which breaks the sentence structure. Removing the period and 'I'm' creates a grammatically correct and coherent sentence.

× It really helps to brighten my mood, especially when I come over something bad at after school or work.

✓ It really helps to brighten my mood, especially when I come across something bad after school or work.

The phrase 'come over something bad at after school or work' is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'come across' meaning to encounter, and the preposition 'at' before 'after school' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing 'at' and using 'come across' corrects the sentence.

× No, I didn't. Because at that time my family did and allowed me to each that much chocolate.

✓ No, I didn't. Because at that time my family did not allow me to eat that much chocolate.

The sentence has a plural issue with 'each' which should be 'eat' (verb) and the auxiliary verb 'did' is incomplete without 'not' to form the negative. Correcting 'each' to 'eat' and adding 'not' after 'did' fixes the grammar.

× As a kid because of the high of the high sugar content in chocolate but later are when I have money I go to war and have money to afford myself some chocolate at.

✓ As a kid, because of the high sugar content in chocolate, I didn't eat much, but later when I had money, I went to the store and could afford some chocolate for myself.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'go to war' and 'have money to afford myself some chocolate at'. Reconstructing the sentence with proper clauses and correcting vocabulary improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Just one or $2.00 you can get yourself one delicious steak of chocolate.

✓ Just one or two dollars, you can get yourself one delicious stick of chocolate.

The phrase 'one or $2.00' is unclear and should be 'one or two dollars'. Also, 'steak' is incorrect; the correct word is 'stick' when referring to a piece of chocolate. These corrections fix the preposition and word choice errors.

× Secondly, because because of the market in yes, they makes us feel like eating chocolate is happy.

✓ Secondly, because of the marketing, it makes us feel like eating chocolate is enjoyable.

The original sentence has repeated words 'because because', incorrect pronoun 'they' referring to 'market', and awkward phrasing 'eating chocolate is happy'. Replacing 'they' with 'it' (referring to marketing) and rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× There is a wide range of chocolate nowadays in the market, but my all time favorite is over the original one with a dog with a dark cocoa.

✓ There is a wide range of chocolate nowadays in the market, but my all-time favorite is the original one with dark cocoa.

The phrase 'over the original one with a dog with a dark cocoa' is incorrect. 'Dog' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'dark'. Also, 'all time' should be hyphenated as 'all-time'. Removing unnecessary words and correcting spelling improves the sentence.

× Uh, and 70% and above, Coco contends. I left that one abit bitter but it tastes really good after that.

✓ Uh, and 70% and above cocoa content. I find that one a bit bitter but it tastes really good after that.

'Coco contends' is incorrect; it should be 'cocoa content'. 'I left that one abit bitter' is incorrect; it should be 'I find that one a bit bitter'. Correcting spelling and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× That's a nice idea, but I think as when given gift we have to consider each others people desire an hobbies.

✓ That's a nice idea, but I think when giving a gift we have to consider other people's desires and hobbies.

The phrase 'as when given gift' is incorrect; it should be 'when giving a gift'. 'Each others people desire an hobbies' is incorrect; it should be 'other people's desires and hobbies'. Correcting pronouns and plural forms improves grammar.

× For example if we give a person with diabetes at some chocolates.

✓ For example, if we give a person with diabetes some chocolates.

The preposition 'at' before 'some chocolates' is incorrect and unnecessary. Removing 'at' corrects the sentence.