Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and complete answer with correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a direct response, then explain your reason clearly and concisely.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like eating chocolate because I have loved it since I was a child. It makes me feel happy and relaxed whenever I eat it.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a month because I prefer not to eat too many sweet foods.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use past tense correctly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because it was my favourite treat. For example, my father used to bring me chocolate every day, which made me very happy.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons and examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it brings happiness and sweetness. For example, people often give chocolate as a gift on special occasions like birthdays and celebrations.

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer first, then explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and grammar.

Ví dụ: My favourite flavour of chocolate is milk chocolate because it is sweet and creamy, unlike dark chocolate which is more bitter.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a good gift because it brings happiness and relaxation. For example, giving chocolate can help strengthen relationships between people.

× Because I am fond of chocolate from my childhood, I found I find I feels very legs whenever I eat it.

✓ Because I have been fond of chocolate since my childhood, I feel very good whenever I eat it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses multiple verb forms ('found', 'find', 'feels') and the word 'legs' which seems to be a typo. The correct present tense verb 'feel' should be used to express a current feeling. Also, 'from my childhood' should be 'since my childhood' to indicate a time period starting in the past continuing to the present.

× It's the chocolate because it gives me like a.

✓ It's the chocolate because it gives me pleasure.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses 'like a' incorrectly. The definite article 'the' is correctly used before 'chocolate' but the sentence needs a proper noun or noun phrase after 'gives me'. Replacing 'like a' with 'pleasure' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Well, uh, during my this age I would like to eat the chocolate probably like once or twice in a month because I don't like the like the sugar shook sweet things very much.

✓ Well, at my age, I would like to eat chocolate probably once or twice a month because I don't like very sweet things with a lot of sugar.

The phrase 'during my this age' is incorrect; 'at my age' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'in a month' should be 'a month' without 'in'. The phrase 'sugar shook sweet things' is unclear and corrected to 'very sweet things with a lot of sugar' for clarity.

× Definitely, I often eat chocolate when I was Pose a Kate because at that time.

✓ Definitely, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because at that time.

The verb 'eat' should be in the past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame 'when I was a kid'. 'Pose a Kate' seems to be a mishearing or typo and is corrected to 'a kid'.

× Like my first priority is to eat chocolates, for example, my father like on the day my father like every day my father brings such a broad the chocolate for me because it makes made me happy and also.

✓ My first priority was to eat chocolates. For example, my father, every day, brought chocolate for me because it made me happy.

The verbs 'is' and 'like' are incorrectly used in present tense and should be past tense 'was' and 'brought' to match the past context. 'Makes made me happy' is redundant; 'made me happy' is correct.

× According to my viewpoint, chocolate is popular on the world because it gives gives everyone happiness and sweetness.

✓ According to my viewpoint, chocolate is popular in the world because it gives everyone happiness and sweetness.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to the world; the correct preposition is 'in'.

× For example, it is also like a popular as to give to somebody's as a present like for the happy occasions as well as we can also give to others for their birthday.

✓ For example, it is also popular to give to somebody as a present for happy occasions, and we can also give it to others for their birthdays.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'Somebody's' should be 'somebody', and 'like a popular as to give' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and clearer structure.

× To be honest I my favorite flavor for chocolate is the Milky because I just only like the milk flair because it's sweet and not like very pure so as compared to the dark chocolates.

✓ To be honest, my favorite flavor of chocolate is milky because I only like the milk flavor; it's sweet and not very strong compared to dark chocolates.

'Milky' is the correct adjective form, not 'Milky' as a noun. 'Flair' is a misspelling of 'flavor'. 'Just only' is redundant; 'only' suffices. 'Not like very pure' is unclear and corrected to 'not very strong' to convey the intended meaning.

× Definitely, I think that it is good to use the chocolate as a gift to give them to others because it also gives them the hapiness and.

✓ Definitely, I think that it is good to use chocolate as a gift to give to others because it also gives them happiness and relaxation.

The phrase 'use the chocolate as a gift to give them to others' is awkward; 'use chocolate as a gift to give to others' is clearer. 'Hapiness' is a spelling error corrected to 'happiness'. The sentence is completed with 'and relaxation' for coherence.

× For example it also like expand the relationships by giving the chopping through this.

✓ For example, it also helps expand relationships by giving chocolate through this.

'Giving the chopping' is a typo and corrected to 'giving chocolate'. The phrase 'through this' is vague but retained; 'helps expand relationships' is a clearer expression.