Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Ya. I like eating. Not sweet. Many, much chocolate.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
Ya. Almost every day.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, because my parents not.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
Because it's very delicious. The flavor is. It's a good, it's fantastic, it's.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
Milk and about. 55% of chocolate.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's a good.
× Ya. I like eating. Not sweet. Many, much chocolate.
✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate. It is not very sweet. I like a lot of chocolate.
原句结构混乱,缺少完整句子,导致表达不清晰。应将短语合并成完整句子,明确表达喜欢吃巧克力且不太甜,喜欢很多巧克力。
× No, because my parents not.
✓ No, because my parents did not allow me.
原句缺少谓语动词,且代词使用不当,导致句子不完整。应补充谓语动词并明确表达父母不允许。
× Because it's very delicious. The flavor is. It's a good, it's fantastic, it's.
✓ Because it's very delicious. The flavor is good and fantastic.
原句断句不完整,缺少谓语和连词,导致表达不连贯。应合并句子,使用连词使表达完整。
× Milk and about. 55% of chocolate.
✓ Milk chocolate and chocolate with about 55% cocoa.
原句断句不完整,表达不清晰。应将信息合并成完整短语,明确表达喜欢牛奶巧克力和含约55%可可的巧克力。
× Yes, it's a good.
✓ Yes, it's a good gift.
原句缺少名词,导致表达不完整。应补充名词“gift”使句子完整。