Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to eating chocolate. I often eat chocolate as a treat.
Giám khảo
How often do you eat chocolate?
Thí sinh
I almost eat chocolate every day as a trade. I open it it be 'cause I liked it St. and. When I need a quite energy boost, I will eat it.
Giám khảo
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I almost eat chocolate every day as a trade. And then I like chocolate 'cause it's well Remember Me that I with my friend to eat chocolate.
Giám khảo
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Thí sinh
I think have the different types of chocolate like milk, dark or white chocolate the different types. I think some people like it.
Giám khảo
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Thí sinh
I like the dark chocolate. Actually I like the I don't like very sweet flavor. I like the dark chocolates. I think this will. Remind my.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, because chocolate has the different types like milk, dark or white. And the chocolate is also presented a gift to people around the world.
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“to eating”应为“to eat”,且回答较简短,缺乏细节。建议使用正确的语法结构,并增加具体原因,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like to eat chocolate because it tastes delicious and helps me relax after a long day.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达混乱,句子不连贯,且有重复和错误。建议简洁明了地表达频率,并说明原因,使用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I eat chocolate almost every day because I enjoy its taste and it gives me a quick energy boost when I feel tired.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,缺少连贯性。建议使用正确时态,清楚表达童年时吃巧克力的频率和原因,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to eat chocolate almost every day when I was a kid because it reminds me of happy times sharing it with my friends.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且表达不完整,缺少具体原因。建议详细说明巧克力受欢迎的原因,使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it comes in many varieties like milk, dark, and white chocolate, which suit different tastes.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明喜欢黑巧克力的原因,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: My favourite flavour is dark chocolate because I prefer less sweet tastes, and it has a rich, intense flavour.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式,增加具体理由,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because it comes in various types like milk, dark, and white, and many people enjoy receiving it.
× Yes, I like to eating chocolate.
✓ Yes, I like eating chocolate.
动词like后面接动名词形式,不能用不定式to + 动词原形。这里应使用动名词eating。
× I almost eat chocolate every day as a trade.
✓ I almost eat chocolate every day as a treat.
单词'trade'用错,应为'treat'表示零食或款待。
× I open it it be 'cause I liked it St. and.
✓ I open it because I like it.
句子结构混乱,'it be'用法错误,应简化为'I open it because I like it'。
× When I need a quite energy boost, I will eat it.
✓ When I need a quick energy boost, I eat it.
此处描述习惯动作,使用一般现在时更合适,且单词'quite'应为'quick'。
× Yes, I almost eat chocolate every day as a trade.
✓ Yes, I almost eat chocolate every day as a treat.
同上,'trade'应为'treat'。
× And then I like chocolate 'cause it's well Remember Me that I with my friend to eat chocolate.
✓ And then I like chocolate because it reminds me of eating chocolate with my friend.
句子结构混乱,'Remember Me'用法错误,应改为'reminds me',并调整句子顺序。
× I think have the different types of chocolate like milk, dark or white chocolate the different types.
✓ I think there are different types of chocolate like milk, dark or white chocolate.
缺少主语和谓语,'have'用法错误,应使用'there are'表示存在。
× Actually I like the I don't like very sweet flavor.
✓ Actually, I don't like very sweet flavors.
句子结构错误,重复且不完整,应简化为'I don't like very sweet flavors'。
× I like the dark chocolates.
✓ I like dark chocolate.
不可数名词chocolate前不加复数形式,且不需要定冠词'the'。
× I think this will. Remind my.
✓ I think this will remind me.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,'my'应为'me'。
× Yes, because chocolate has the different types like milk, dark or white.
✓ Yes, because chocolate has different types like milk, dark or white.
定冠词'the'用法错误,表示泛指时不加定冠词。
× And the chocolate is also presented a gift to people around the world.
✓ And chocolate is also presented as a gift to people around the world.
缺少介词'as',使句子结构完整。