Chocolate— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why chocolate helps you feel better, and conclude with the result.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love eating chocolate, especially when I am feeling low. It helps refresh my mind because it releases dopamine, which improves my mood. As a result, I feel more energetic and positive.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points.

Ví dụ: I usually eat chocolate once a week, especially after a rough day. At the end of the day, I eat dark chocolate because it helps me feel more focused and improves my concentration by releasing dopamine.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to form full sentences and explain your points clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'as a result' properly to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Honestly, when I was a kid, I did not eat chocolates often because my mom was strict about sweets. She believed that eating too much sugar could harm my health and cause cavities. As a result, I rarely ate chocolate.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because of its sweetness. Moreover, it creates a sense of happiness when people eat it, which makes it a favourite treat for many.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Use precise vocabulary and complete sentences. Explain why you prefer that flavour and how it benefits you, using linking words like 'because' and 'therefore'.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer dark chocolate with nuts, such as almonds or raisins, because it is healthier. This combination provides nutrients and does not contribute much to my weight, so it benefits my health.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using smoother sentence structures and linking words. Avoid short, choppy sentences and explain your points clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I believe chocolate is a great gift, especially on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. For example, when I was a kid, I used to give chocolates to my whole class to celebrate special days and share joy.

× Oh yes, I love to eat the chocolate, especially when I am in a.

✓ Oh yes, I love eating chocolate, especially when I am in a low mood.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'in a' is incomplete and should be 'in a low mood' to make sense.

× And low mood because it helps me to refresh our refresh my mind because it releases dopamine and.

✓ And low mood because it helps me to refresh my mind as it releases dopamine.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's own mind. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× As a result, I feel more energetic and my mole. Increase.

✓ As a result, I feel more energetic and my mood increases.

The sentence is fragmented and 'mole' is a typo for 'mood'. The verb 'increase' should be in present tense and agree with singular subject 'mood'.

× Well, I usually eat chocolate a once in a week.

✓ Well, I usually eat chocolate once a week.

The article 'a' before 'once' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'once a week' without an article before 'once'.

× Especially when I had a rough day.

✓ Especially when I have a rough day.

The question is about current habits, so present tense 'have' should be used instead of past tense 'had'.

× At the end of the day, I eat a dark chocolate.

✓ At the end of the day, I eat dark chocolate.

'Chocolate' is an uncountable noun here, so the article 'a' is incorrect and should be removed.

× Because of which I failed. A more focused and my concentration also increases as I eat and dopamine is released.

✓ Because of this, I feel more focused and my concentration also increases as I eat and dopamine is released.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Failed' is incorrect; it should be 'feel'. The sentence needs to be combined properly for clarity.

× Well, honestly speaking when I was a kid, I do not usually.

✓ Well, honestly speaking when I was a kid, I did not usually.

Talking about past habits requires past tense 'did not' instead of present 'do not'.

× Had chocolates a lot because my mom was strict.

✓ Have had chocolates a lot because my mom was strict.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. It should be 'I did not have chocolates a lot because my mom was strict.' to express past habit.

× About eating more sweet so that it can damage my health as well as causes cavity in my T As a result I was not eating a lot but.

✓ About eating too many sweets because it can damage my health as well as cause cavities in my teeth. As a result, I did not eat a lot.

'More sweet' is incorrect; 'too many sweets' is correct. 'Causes cavity in my T' is incorrect; it should be 'cause cavities in my teeth'. The sentence is fragmented and needs correction.

× I recommend that chocolate is very popular all across the globe because of its. Sweetness.

✓ I think that chocolate is very popular all across the globe because of its sweetness.

'Recommend' is not appropriate here; 'think' fits better. Also, the sentence is fragmented and should be combined.

× As well as. It creates this sense of happiness when someone eats it, becaused of course first of all it is sweet in taste so.

✓ As well as creating a sense of happiness when someone eats it because, of course, it is sweet in taste.

Fragmented sentence and incorrect conjunction use. 'Because' is misspelled as 'becaused'. The sentence needs to be combined properly.

× Well I usually prefer the nuts dark chocolate a lot in addition with any nuts like issues or raisins so that it becomes healthy.

✓ Well, I usually prefer dark chocolate with nuts, like cashews or raisins, so that it becomes healthy.

'The nuts dark chocolate' is incorrect; it should be 'dark chocolate with nuts'. 'Issues' is a typo for 'cashews'. 'In addition with' is incorrect preposition usage.

× Eventually it does not contribute to my opacity a lot and it will benefit my health in the other hand.

✓ Eventually, it does not contribute to my obesity a lot and it will benefit my health on the other hand.

'Opacity' is a wrong word; 'obesity' is correct. 'In the other hand' should be 'on the other hand'.

× Oh yes definitely, I believe that chocolate as a gift is a best option to give, especially on special occasions like birthdays or anniversary's.

✓ Oh yes, definitely, I believe that chocolate as a gift is the best option to give, especially on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries.

'A best option' is incorrect; it should be 'the best option'. 'Anniversary's' is incorrect possessive; it should be plural 'anniversaries'.

× For example, when I was a kid I used to give chocolate to my whole class in this school in order to celebrate.

✓ For example, when I was a kid, I used to give chocolate to my whole class in school in order to celebrate.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'in this school' is awkward; 'in school' is better. Commas added for clarity.