Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetitions and awkward phrases. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No + brief reason), then give one specific example with linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles, and replace vague phrases (e.g. 'the different') with precise descriptions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things because I had to study 6 to 9 subjects for my university entrance exams. For example, I developed a system of regular revision and flashcards, which helped me remember formulas and dates effectively.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, fluent account with correct tense and cohesive linking. Start with a topic sentence stating you forgot something important, then briefly explain why and what happened. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. 'my eyes'). Use past tense consistently and include a consequence or lesson learned.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important online exam during my first year at university because I was very busy with extracurricular competitions. As a result, I missed the test deadline and learned to set calendar reminders and alarms to avoid the same mistake.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly. Use a topic sentence that states what you do need to remember daily, even if it's simple routines. Use specific examples and correct grammar (singular/plural agreement, verb forms). Use linking words to contrast general and specific items.

Ví dụ: Nowadays I don't have many urgent daily tasks, but I do need to remember study-related routines. For instance, I regularly remind myself to revise for the bar exam and practice English for at least an hour each day to stay on track.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific methods with brief details and linking words. Fix grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and remove hesitations. Explain why the methods work to show depth.

Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by taking notes, either on paper or in a phone to-do list, and by adding tasks to my calendar. These methods work because notes capture details while calendar reminders prompt me at the right time.

× I think in some aspect I'm a really good memorizer because when I was in my high school, we got to have the university interest examination.

✓ I think in some aspects I'm a really good memorizer because when I was in high school, we had to take the university entrance examination.

Errors: 'in some aspect' should be plural 'in some aspects' (incorrect use of quantifier/phrase). 'my high school' is unneeded possessive; use 'in high school'. 'we got to have' is informal/incorrect for obligation; use 'we had to take'. 'university interest examination' is incorrect collocation; 'university entrance examination' is the proper term. Suggestion: use correct collocations and pluralize phrases when referring to multiple aspects. Grammar problem type ID:6

× During that examination, I have to learn about 6 to 9 subjects.

✓ During that examination, I had to learn about six to nine subjects.

Error: tense mismatch. The speaker is describing a past event but uses present tense 'have to'. Use past tense 'had to'. Also write numbers in words for formal writing. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame being described. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So I need to memorize a lot of knowledge and the different.

✓ So I needed to memorize a lot of information and different subjects.

Errors: tense inconsistency ('need' present vs past context), awkward phrase 'a lot of knowledge' better as 'a lot of information', and 'and the different' is incomplete. Suggestion: use 'different subjects' to complete the thought and keep past tense for past events. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes. And that experience maybe sounds a little bit embarrassed because when I was in my first year of university during a period of time I'm really busy, I'm really busy with a lot of activity competitions and and my eyes, so I forgot an online examination.

✓ Yes. That experience may sound a little embarrassing because when I was in my first year of university I was really busy for a period of time with many competitions and activities, and I lost track of time, so I missed an online examination.

Multiple errors: modal 'maybe' + 'sounds' tense wrong—use 'may sound' for possibility. 'a little bit embarrassed' should be 'a little embarrassing' (incorrect use of adjective/adverb). Tense consistency: 'I'm really busy' should be past 'I was really busy'. 'a lot of activity competitions' is incorrect collocation; use 'many competitions and activities'. 'and my eyes' is unclear—likely meant 'lost track of time' or 'was distracted'. Use 'missed an online examination' instead of 'forgot an online examination'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, choose correct adjectives, and clarify vague phrases. Grammar problem type ID:5

× In these days, there are not too much important things I need to remember, particularly every day, because the whole delivery team is quite the same thing, such as preparing for the bar examination or prepare for the English examination.

✓ These days, there are not too many important things I need to remember every day, because the whole delivery team is doing similar tasks, such as preparing for the bar examination or preparing for the English examination.

Errors: 'In these days' should be 'These days' (word order). 'not too much important things' uses 'much' with countable noun; use 'many'. Remove redundant 'particularly every day'. 'the whole delivery team is quite the same thing' is ungrammatical—use 'doing similar tasks' or 'is largely the same'. Parallelism: 'preparing... or prepare' should be both 'preparing'. Suggestion: use correct quantifier for countable nouns, maintain parallel structure, and simplify phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So there are no, there isn't something I need to remember essential.

✓ So there is nothing essential I need to remember.

Errors: conflicting 'there are no' and 'there isn't' in same sentence and incorrect word order 'remember essential'. Use 'there is nothing essential I need to remember' or 'there is nothing I need to remember that is essential'. Suggestion: avoid double negatives/conflicting structures and place adjectives before the noun they modify. Grammar problem type ID:3

× One of the most common way I used to remember things is taking notes, no matter on the paper or on the phones To Do List.

✓ One of the most common ways I use to remember things is taking notes, whether on paper or on my phone's To-Do list.

Errors: 'way' should be plural 'ways' after 'one of the'. Tense 'used to' implies past habit; if habitual now, use 'use'. 'no matter on the paper or on the phones To Do List' is awkward—use 'whether on paper or on my phone's To-Do list'. Also possessive 'phone's' and hyphenation 'To-Do list'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'one of the' and use clear prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Sometimes I think right or take the things I need to do into my calendar.

✓ Sometimes I write or put the things I need to do into my calendar.

Errors: 'think right' is incorrect collocation; likely meant 'write'. 'take the things I need to do into my calendar' is awkward—use 'put ... into my calendar'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for actions (write/put) and ensure clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It's quite it's quite convenient for me to see and do in the day.

✓ It's quite convenient for me to see and do them during the day.

Errors: repetition 'It's quite it's quite' and missing object 'them' and awkward preposition 'in the day' should be 'during the day'. Suggestion: remove repetition and include the object; use correct time preposition. Grammar problem type ID:13