Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., use correct verb forms and articles). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences. Focus on one idea at a time and give a concrete example of what you remember about clients.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. For example, at work I remember each client’s preferences and personality, so I can suggest strategies that suit them. Because of this, clients often feel understood and return to our company.

Gợi ý: Start with a concise direct answer, then give a clear reason and a brief result. Use correct tense and simpler phrases (e.g., “I forget to lock the door” not “forget to lock my house door” repeatedly). Use one linking phrase for reason like “because” or “since” and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For instance, I often forget to lock my front door, which makes my mother angry. This happens because I’m distracted when I leave the house, so now I try to check the door as part of my leaving routine.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming what you need to remember, then support with a reason and a short example. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly. Clean up unclear phrases (e.g., “living house time” should be “when to leave the house” or “appointments”), and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: I need to remember when to leave the house so I can arrive on time. Being punctual is respectful to friends and colleagues, so I always check the time before I leave and set reminders if I have an important appointment.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear structure: state your main method, explain how it helps, and mention a limitation or improvement. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “notes” or “reminders” instead of “memo” repeatedly) and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words like “because” and “however.”

Ví dụ: I usually use the notes or reminder app on my smartphone because I always carry it and check it frequently. This helps me remember important tasks, but sometimes I still forget to set a reminder, so I am training myself to create a reminder as soon as I think of a task.

× Yes, I think so. For example, in the business, I usually remember the client's character and the favorite.

✓ Yes, I think so. For example, in business, I usually remember a client's character and their favorites.

The sentence uses 'the business' unnecessarily and 'client's character and the favorite' is unclear. Use 'in business' (no article) and 'a client's character and their favorites' to make plurality and possessive reference correct. Also replace 'the favorite' with 'their favorites' to refer to things the client likes.

× So I usually so Ioffer some the business strategy to for them.

✓ So I usually offer some business strategies to them.

This sentence has repeated words and incorrect article and preposition use. Remove duplicate 'so', change 'ioffer' to 'I offer', use plural 'strategies' if more than one, and use 'to them' instead of 'to for them'.

× It's which is the favorable things for them and but I'm not a good at memorable in the study.

✓ These are favorable things for them, but I'm not good at memorising studies.

'It's which is' is ungrammatical. Use 'These are' to refer to plural 'things'. 'Favorable' is okay but 'the favorable things for them' is awkward; 'These are favorable things for them' is clearer. 'I'm not a good at memorable in the study' mixes forms; use 'I'm not good at memorising studies' or 'I'm not good at memorising things for study.'

× So I usually explains in the hard times in study.

✓ So I usually struggle during hard times in my studies.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'I usually explains' is incorrect (should be 'I usually explain' but better is 'I usually struggle'). 'In the hard times in study' is awkward; use 'during hard times in my studies.' This fixes tense and makes meaning clear.

× Yes, I usually forget to lock my house door, so I usually I am usually scolded my mom's.

✓ Yes, I usually forget to lock my house door, so my mom usually scolds me.

Redundant 'usually' and incorrect passive/possessive 'I am usually scolded my mom's.' Use active voice: 'my mom usually scolds me.' This corrects tense and pronoun use.

× The reason why I forget this one is because I think that I recognize the looking door is not a board, not important for me, so I usually forget it.

✓ I forget because I think the unlocked door is not a big deal and not important to me, so I usually forget it.

Use 'unlocked door' instead of 'looking door' and 'not a big deal' instead of 'not a board.' Remove 'the reason why' redundancy by simply 'I forget because.' This corrects word choice and pronoun/reference clarity.

× I keep in my mind not to forget the living house time, uh, because I would love to arrive at the uh, places on time.

✓ I keep in mind not to miss the time to leave home because I want to arrive at places on time.

'Keep in my mind' should be 'keep in mind.' 'Living house time' is unclear; use 'the time to leave home' or 'departure time.' 'Would love to' can be simplified to 'want to' to match habitual present. This clarifies sentence structure and tense.

× So be because it is uh, polite for the friend or some people.

✓ This is polite for friends or other people.

Remove filler words and correct article use: 'the friend' -> 'friends'; 'some people' -> 'other people.' Simplify to make sentence natural.

× So I usually check the time before leaving and I I usually prioritize this time.

✓ So I usually check the time before leaving and I prioritize it.

Remove duplicated 'I' and redundant 'usually.' Use 'prioritize it' to refer to the departure time. This fixes repetition and keeps present tense consistent.

× I try to keep notes on my smart phone memo because I always carry with my smart phone and I check that all the time.

✓ I try to keep notes in my smartphone memo because I always carry my smartphone and check it all the time.

Use 'in' for notes stored in an app ('in my smartphone memo'). Remove unnecessary 'with' after 'carry' and use singular 'smartphone' consistently. Replace 'that' with 'it' to refer to the phone/memo.

× So keep in note on smartphone.

✓ So keeping notes on my smartphone helps.

Fragments: 'So keep in note on smartphone' is not a complete sentence. Change to a full clause 'keeping notes on my smartphone helps' to convey the meaning.

× It plays an import download in, uh, letting reminding me the important things, but I usually forget to the the memo.

✓ It plays an important role in reminding me of important things, but I usually forget the memo.

Replace 'import download' with 'important role' and fix verb phrases: 'letting reminding me' -> 'reminding me of.' Remove duplicate 'the the' and incorrect preposition 'to' before 'the memo.' This corrects vocabulary and structure.