Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak more clearly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I’m average at memorising things.”), avoid redundant or contradictory phrases, and limit to up to five coherent sentences. Use simple, accurate words (e.g., “good memory” not “facility memory”) and correct verb forms (I forget, I remember). Add one specific example to support your point.

Ví dụ: I’m average at memorising things. I often forget small everyday items like keys or where I left my bag, but I remember important information such as deadlines or meeting details. For example, I rarely forget work deadlines because I write them down and review them each morning.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct the vocabulary and grammar errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and briefly explain the method you use to avoid forgetting. Use correct expressions like “note down” or “write down”, and avoid unnecessary words. Give one specific example of what you note down and how it helped.

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t forgotten anything important recently because I always note down tasks in a notes app on my phone. For example, I wrote down the date and time of a dentist appointment, and the phone reminder alerted me the day before so I didn’t miss it.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the specific things you must remember (e.g., schedule, bills, meetings). Avoid unclear words like “benefits” if you mean “bills” or “tasks.” Use linking words to organise details and provide one concrete example with correct time expressions. Keep the answer natural and within five sentences.

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily schedule and important tasks like bill payments and appointments. For instance, I always check my calendar on Saturday mornings to confirm plans with friends and set reminders two minutes before each appointment so I arrive on time.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid asking the examiner back. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your main method (e.g., “I rely on my phone and written notes”). Correct phrases: “note down” (not “talking down”), “notes app” (not “nose up”), and “set reminders.” Give one specific process and example, and use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I rely mainly on my phone and written notes to remember important things. I note down tasks in my phone’s notes app and then set reminders for deadlines; for example, I set a reminder two days before an exam and check my notes each evening to stay prepared.

× But to be honest, I will say that I have facility memory.

✓ But to be honest, I would say that I have a good memory.

The student used 'facility' incorrectly as an adjective; the correct expression is 'a good memory'. Also 'will say' is odd in this context; 'would say' is more natural for hedging. Replace the adjective with 'good' and use the noun phrase 'a good memory' to fix the grammatical and idiomatic error.

× I tend to completely forget small everyday things, but I effort effortlessly re remain information that I consider important and meaningful.

✓ I tend to completely forget small everyday things, but I effortlessly remember information that I consider important and meaningful.

Multiple errors: 'effort effortlessly re remain' is incorrect word forms and order. The verb should be 'remember' (base form) after the adverb 'effortlessly'. Remove the extraneous words and place the adverb before the verb: 'effortlessly remember'.

× Actually, I don't think I have ever forgotten anything crucial because I have a habit of touching down everything in the nose app on my phone.

✓ Actually, I don't think I have ever forgotten anything crucial because I have a habit of writing everything down in the Notes app on my phone.

The student used incorrect verbs and nouns: 'touching down' and 'nose app' are wrong. Use 'writing down' or 'jotting down' and the correct app name 'Notes'. The present perfect 'have ever forgotten' matches the habit, so keep tense but correct vocabulary and verb phrase.

× In additional, I often take them regularly to make sure I don't miss anything.

✓ In addition, I often check them regularly to make sure I don't miss anything.

'In additional' is incorrect; use 'In addition'. 'Take them regularly' is unclear; the intended meaning is likely 'check them regularly'. Use the verb 'check' to match the context and place the adverb 'regularly' after the verb phrase if preferred.

× In my daily life I mostly need to remember my schedule and benefits.

✓ In my daily life, I mostly need to remember my schedule and appointments.

'Benefits' is inappropriate here; context suggests 'appointments' or 'plans'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase for clarity. Replace the incorrect noun to match meaning.

× For example, I have AI have to keep a check out of my Saturday life and appointment with my friends 2 minutes out of that.

✓ For example, I have to keep track of my Saturday plans and appointments with my friends, sometimes planning them just a couple of minutes in advance.

This sentence contains many errors: stray 'AI', 'keep a check out of', 'Saturday life', and '2 minutes out of that' are incorrect. Replace with 'keep track of', 'Saturday plans', and clarify timing as 'a couple of minutes in advance'. Reorder for natural English.

× I always rely on my phone too.

✓ I always rely on my phone too.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses the correct subject-verb agreement and tense.

× Do you remember important things? I mostly rely on technology.

✓ I mostly rely on technology to remember important things.

The first question 'Do you remember important things?' appears to be the examiner's, not the student's. Combining into one clear student response improves coherence: 'I mostly rely on technology to remember important things.' This fixes sentence structure and clarifies the subject and purpose.

× I mentioned I have a habit of talking down everything, everything in my phone's nose up.

✓ I mentioned I have a habit of writing everything down in my phone's Notes app.

Multiple vocabulary errors: 'talking down' should be 'writing down' or 'jotting down'; 'nose up' should be 'Notes app'. Use the noun 'Notes app' and correct verb phrase 'writing everything down'. Remove the repeated 'everything' for concision.

× On top of that, I certainly reminder on my phone so.

✓ On top of that, I set reminders on my phone.

'Certainly reminder on my phone so' is ungrammatical. Use the verb phrase 'set reminders' to express creating reminders. This corrects word choice and word order to form a grammatical sentence.