Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things such as memorize the test and many questions.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Not really, but one time I forget an important thing that is a test time because I led to the classroom and forget the test. It is really ridiculous.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I usually take a note and stick in my study task and I use the phone to create a electronic note. Then it will remind me.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Actually I have no idea, but I will do some physical methods to help me remember the important things and the first is I will write down in my notebook. It is useful and helpful for me to memorize it.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、明确,并避免重复。开头用一句主题句直接回答,随后用一两句具体例子说明“擅长记忆”的方式和场景,句子不宜过长或重复同义表达。注意动词形式和冠词(memorize → memorizing),以及不要重复“memorize”两次。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am fairly good at memorizing. For example, when I study for exams I use flashcards and short summaries, which help me remember key facts and typical questions.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要清楚描述一次具体事件并使用正确时态。先直接回答,然后简要描述发生了什么、原因和结果,最好加一个短的反思。修正语法错误(forget → forgot,led → went/was late),避免笼统或含糊表达。
Ví dụ: Actually I have forgotten something important once. I missed the start of an exam because I arrived late to the classroom, so I missed part of the test and felt very embarrassed. Since then I always set two alarms to avoid being late.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答结构良好但可更具体和连贯。先给主题句,再说明具体记什么(课程、约会等),并解释用哪些提醒工具以及它们如何起作用。使用连词使句子流畅,注意名词复数和冠词(take a note → take notes,create a electronic note → create an electronic note)。
Ví dụ: I need to remember things like assignment deadlines and appointments. I usually take notes and set reminders on my phone, so the alerts and calendar notifications help me stay on track.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要自信且具体。不要说“I have no idea”——直接说明方法并列举两三种具体做法,解释每种方法的效果。使用连词连接要点,句子简洁且避免重复(useful and helpful 重复)。
Ví dụ: I use several practical methods to remember important things. First, I write them down in a dedicated notebook, and I also set phone reminders and review my notes every evening to make sure I don't forget.
× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things such as memorize the test and many questions.
✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing things such as memorizing tests and many questions.
句中 after "such as" 要接名词或动名词短语,而不是不带-ing 的动词原形。将 "memorize the test" 改为 "memorizing tests" 更符合语法和习惯表达。建议多使用动名词(-ing)来表示“记忆……这类事”。
× Not really, but one time I forget an important thing that is a test time because I led to the classroom and forget the test.
✓ Not really, but one time I forgot something important — the test — because I went to the classroom and forgot the test.
此处描述过去发生的事情,谓语应使用过去时。"forget" 和 "led" 应分别改为过去式 "forgot" 和 "went"(或 "led" 若意为带领则不合上下文,正确应为 "went")。另外句子结构混乱,使用破折号或逗号分隔说明更清晰。建议:描述过去事件时,所有主要动词都用过去式。
× I usually take a note and stick in my study task and I use the phone to create a electronic note.
✓ I usually take a note and stick it in my study planner, and I use my phone to create an electronic note.
"take a note" 常用作 "take a note/note down" 或直接用 "make a note"。"stick in my study task" 介词和名词搭配不当,应该是把便签贴到学习计划(study planner)或把任务写入计划。"create a electronic note" 前面的不定冠词应为 "an",并且 "phone" 前应有所有格 "my"。建议注意固定搭配(make a note / stick it in)和冠词使用。
× Then it will remind me.
✓ Then it will remind me.
本句语法正确,无需修改。"remind" 与主语 "it" 搭配正确,时态为将来/习惯性结果,符合语境。建议保持不变。
× Actually I have no idea, but I will do some physical methods to help me remember the important things and the first is I will write down in my notebook.
✓ Actually I have no idea, but I use some physical methods to help me remember important things. The first is that I write them down in my notebook.
原句时态和结构混杂,"will do some physical methods" 表达不自然,且 "the first is I will write down in my notebook" 缺少宾语。改为一般现在时更符合习惯(描述常用方法),并补全宾语(write them down)。建议用更自然的表达:"I use physical methods" 和 "I write them down"。
× It is useful and helpful for me to memorize it.
✓ It is useful and helpful for me to remember it.
此处不需要用动名词 "memorize it" 表示动作对象时更自然用 "remember it"。两者意义接近,但 "remember it" 更口语、常用于表示能记住某事。也可改为动名词短语如 "help me memorize it"。建议根据上下文选择 "help me remember" 或 "help me memorize" 并保持一致。