Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid informal fillers and exaggerations. Correct word choice (e.g. "academic performance is excellent") and reduce repetitions. Use a linking word when contrasting (e.g. "however").

Ví dụ: It depends. I find it hard to remember everyday details like names or phone numbers; however, I am good at memorising information for school, and my test results reflect that. For instance, I can quickly recall facts and formulas when studying.

Gợi ý: Organise your response: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific examples with brief consequences. Fix grammar (e.g. "It happens quite often in daily life") and avoid trailing off. Use linking words (e.g. "for example", "as a result").

Ví dụ: Yes, I forget important things quite often. For example, once I left an iron plugged in and later noticed scorch marks on the carpet, which was dangerous. Another time I forgot my headphones at home and missed an online lesson as a result.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence about daily memory needs, then give specific examples (grammar rules, vocabulary, schedules). Correct phrases and tense (e.g. "Nowadays"). Avoid fillers and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Nowadays I attend an English course, so I need to remember grammar structures, new vocabulary, and assignment deadlines. For example, I review phrasal verbs each evening and set reminders for homework due dates.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence describing your method, then explain the technique with a clear example. Improve grammar (e.g. "I took a course on memorising") and use linking words (e.g. "for example", "so"). Avoid unclear phrases like "linking A and a"—explain the method plainly.

Ví dụ: I learned memory techniques in a course a few years ago, and I now use association to remember things. For example, I link the iron to my phone by imagining the iron sitting on my phone so I remember to unplug it before I leave.

× Wow it really depends.

✓ Wow, it really depends.

Missing comma after interjection 'Wow'; not a core grammar list but punctuation improves clarity. Keep present tense as 'depends' to indicate general truth.

× If it's something related to real life activities like remembering names or numbers, it's so hard for me to remember them.

✓ If it's something related to real-life activities, like remembering names or numbers, it's very hard for me to remember them.

Use hyphen in compound adjective 'real-life' and 'very' is more appropriate than informal 'so' in this context. The verb 'it's' is correct for third person singular.

× But when it comes to educational activities I'm quite good at it since my academic performance literally absolute.

✓ But when it comes to educational activities, I'm quite good at them since my academic performance is consistently strong.

Plural pronoun 'them' matches 'activities' and you must include the verb 'is' (present tense) before the adjective. 'Literally absolute' is incorrect collocation; use 'consistently strong' to describe ongoing academic performance.

× Honestly it happens really often in a daily life.

✓ Honestly, it happens very often in daily life.

Remove the article 'a' before 'daily life' and use 'very often' rather than 'really often' for natural phrasing. Keep present tense for habitual action.

× For example I might forget to unplug the iron which caused a lot of problems for me in the long term.

✓ For example, I once forgot to unplug the iron, which caused a lot of problems for me in the long term.

Use a past simple 'forgot' to match 'caused' and add 'once' to indicate a past incident. Comma before 'which' introduces the non-restrictive clause.

× Than I forgot to bring my headphones with myself in my coach center because it was literally needed.

✓ Then I forgot to bring my headphones with me to my coaching center because I really needed them.

Use 'Then' (time sequence), 'with me' not 'with myself', 'to my coaching center' for correct preposition and noun form, and 'them' to agree in number with 'headphones'. Replace 'literally' with 'really' for correct emphasis.

× But I.

✓ But I didn't notice until later.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and object. Completed sentence provides a plausible meaning and correct structure.

× Never days I am studying at English course so that's why I have to remember the structures, the rules related to English and most of the time uh it doesn't include any kind of numbers or names as as I listed before, it's often about English.

✓ Nowadays I am studying at an English course, so I have to remember structures and rules related to English, and most of the time it doesn't involve numbers or names as I mentioned before; it's often about language concepts.

Replace 'Never days' with 'Nowadays'. Use article 'an' before 'English course'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before plural non-specific nouns ('structures, rules'). Use 'involve' instead of 'include' for natural collocation. Fixed repetition 'as as' and clarified final clause. Maintains present continuous 'am studying' appropriately.

× Well, I happened to course at memorizing few years ago and then I learned a little trick called linking A and a.

✓ Well, I took a course in memorization a few years ago, and then I learned a little trick called linking.

Use 'took a course' and 'in memorization' rather than 'happened to course at memorizing'. 'A few years ago' needs 'a'. Removed redundant 'A and a' which seems incorrect; kept 'linking' as the technique name.

× It's more often association things with other things, so it's it will be easy to remember such as iron with my phone or I often link them.

✓ It's more often associating things with other things, so it's easier to remember; for example, I might link the iron with my phone.

Use gerund 'associating' after 'more often' to form a noun phrase. Use 'easier' for comparative adjective and restructure sentence for clarity. Added 'for example' and corrected article use 'the iron'.